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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your mind,use of chkra,shota,K.B. all ninja talents and sex and Sasuke TOO.oh yea.I am a happy happy campurr.More personality,reactions could be nice next time.Thanks.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it! v'ry good, v'ry good!! please tell me your going to write alot more of this because you suddenly had a huge stroke of inspiration? (reading Make-Out Paradise is cheating!)
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase? *sad face* i wanna see what happens next!
well, ciao!
"Celluloid heroes never feel any pain."
Noberu-sama
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase? *sad face* i wanna see what happens next!
well, ciao!
"Celluloid heroes never feel any pain."
Noberu-sama
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiiiice.... so you gonna add a second chapter? i woudln't mind it if Sasuke and Kakashi decided that Naruto needed to learn too...
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up* OMG, that was a GREAT ending!!! Absolutely hilarious!!! ^___~ Great idea -- keep up the good work!!!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
X3 I love that ending. I'm basically having to bite my tongue so I'm not laughing loud enough to wake up my room mates...
Mweee.
Mweee.
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohohoho! Just like Naruto. Teehees.
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah. that was so cool and then with naruto at the end. genius (i hope i spelled that right). i hope there's more to this. a possible threesome? i hope.
p.s. great story^_^V
p.s. great story^_^V