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by chy

schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ur writing is better that before. It's really interesting so plz update soon. I want to see what would happen to sasuke and gaara.
person miki-san
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ur writing is definantly improving..... to tell u the truth... ur lemons are HOT!!! and its hotness radiats off into me.... hmmmm yummy... hehe
person miki-san
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naruto and sasuke rocks!!! such a sexy combo... i am such a lemony perv... kinda like kakashi!!
person hieisfiredemon
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I like your story so much. Woot for Gaara/Naruto/Sasuke. By the way, it's not just the lemons, you're a good writer! And I had to review you to tell you that. I enjoy your whole story, not just the lemons. So keep it up! I wanna know what happens :)
person ^^
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
of course your writing has improved!
you got a wider range of vocabulary used
and also
it's getting more better type of lemon!
heheh....
person Angel
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great! I looooooooovvvvveeeee it!!!! PLEASE GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
person beetle
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice....the fic is going great ive been following it scince it started i wanted to see where it was going with the plot and i have to say is coming out wonderfull . yes your writing has inproved scince the beggining of the fic and im looking foward to future improvements (chapter long threesome?? ^.^) . i think i know where your going with this and i cant wait to see if you completly twist it right out of my predictions cause thats always fun

-beetle
person Kayori
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* My goodness!! That's a REALLY long lemon ^_^;;;; XDDD

Don't forget to email me again just to tell me that you've updated XD I can't
wait till you update again!! *sighs* *bows* You are a MASTER of writing lemons!

Update Soon~!
person gatomon666
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot gaara and sasuke and naruto makes three geez i have seen many crossovers in my life but yours is good i have seen and it is so goooood.

anyway your fic rulez sasuke-kun is so cool and gaara-kun is so possessive and naruto-kun is so horny.

you rock this is the greatest fic on the planet

just a little ego booster for you.
person Sukara
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum! xD -Drools- Long long lemon. =3 -Lubs it- -Huggles your fic- Since it's such a long lemon, it was worth waiting for. x3
Reminds me, got to get writing my chapter for my fic...-Is slacking- >.>