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yay, an update and a lemon, you rock!!! now bring in gaara for the threesome, sasuke did say he would do anything for naruto!!! XDD UPDATE SOON!!

Very yummy! ^^ I'm so very glad that you updated, and yes, your writing has improved, lol. ^___^ Keep up the giood work!!!

Omg your story is so delicious! Promise that you'll have Naruto with Gaara and Sasuke together!!!

OH MY GOD...This is one of the absolutely hottest lemons I've ever read...
I can't tell you if your writing improves on the basis of this chapter, except smut scenes, because this is just one, sweeeeet, white-hot, mind-blowing lemon :)
But lemons are SURE getting better XD

WOOT! You're back to writing this story! I was worried for a while there.
This was definately a good lemon, but the last sentence made me wonder...Exactly how IS Naruto going to break the idea to his lovers? And if he's the one in the middle, what's the order going to be for the other two? Heh, Gaara or Sasuke would have to be an uke, and that just make me start giggling like a tween girl when I start thinking about it...

Hi Vampchic! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading and reviewing your fic. I've only read the first chapter so far. I will post reviews for each one as I get through them. You got the characterizations down perfect, all the actions described well and stuff. No OCC as far as I could tell. As I read I could visualize the story in anime form in my head^_^ The part with Naruto getting aroused off the trees, that was great, lol. And cum cum paradise is a nice touch too! I can't really think of anything to critique(spell right?) besides maybe adding a little description. The pace and dialogued went well. Hope my review helps! take care

WOW! is all I can say. Chapter 2 was HOT! You've inspired me to write a lemon, which I'll stick soon in my sasunaru fic. One thing though, no oil or lube, that must of painfulO_o

Gods u're good!

OMFG!!!!! That was soooo kawaii I almost couldn't take it!!!! Awwww he Purrs! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
Hehe and Kakashi beggin for details.....so easily true......
Yep just thought I'd review this chapter before I forgot the kakashi and purr kawaiiness...good fic......great fic!

Oooo review more when I get closer the the end ^^ Thanks for writing it btw.

~alisha

You BASTARD! Lol jk mate, heh good chapter..althought it does make my review of the previous chapter of its "kawaiiness" seem rather bleak.....

So evil to poor Naruto.....that's okay I love my Bishonens beaten and hurt....pooor things.

Will review more later keep up the great/evil work :P

~alisha