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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh oh yeah teh first review was of chapter 6, the one after that 7, and this one is of 9, just noticed that it didn't say which one I was reviewing...so there you go just so you aren't confused, I'll post which one I'm reviewing from now on :)
OMG you made me laugh sooooo hard with Ero Sennen!!! God I'm still laughing away tears!!! Oh man that was horrible!!!! OMFG that was sooooo awesome!!! You write humor really really well!!!! *cough*...not to mention lemons....GO GAARA!...*cough*....hehe in heat demons.....what more could I ask for.....
Thank you review again when I get to where you last updated.
~alisha
OMG you made me laugh sooooo hard with Ero Sennen!!! God I'm still laughing away tears!!! Oh man that was horrible!!!! OMFG that was sooooo awesome!!! You write humor really really well!!!! *cough*...not to mention lemons....GO GAARA!...*cough*....hehe in heat demons.....what more could I ask for.....
Thank you review again when I get to where you last updated.
~alisha
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 Review
Poop.....have to wait for you to update now...heh hope you enjoyed the spamtacular reviews all at once while I read your enticing story.
I hope you update soon....and man the tension between Those 3 is great wow just ache for more....although I'm more of a Gaara fan(you just make Sasuke soooo dang cute with Naruto I like him too!!) Hehe can't wait to see what goes down with the Atakusika(nope, I cannot spell that one) and thier aquiring of Naruto.
Hope you update soon...
~alisha
Poop.....have to wait for you to update now...heh hope you enjoyed the spamtacular reviews all at once while I read your enticing story.
I hope you update soon....and man the tension between Those 3 is great wow just ache for more....although I'm more of a Gaara fan(you just make Sasuke soooo dang cute with Naruto I like him too!!) Hehe can't wait to see what goes down with the Atakusika(nope, I cannot spell that one) and thier aquiring of Naruto.
Hope you update soon...
~alisha
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, interesting. My vote goes to a SasuNaruGaara threesome. ;3 Can't wait to read more of this.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Sorry for my language, I'm french, lol (so, even if I could well understand your writing, I'm not sure for mine... Gomen for my mistakes and my poor vocabulary, hé hé)
I love very much your fanfiction, though I don't read a lot of R-rating fanfic (I didn't think that it was possible to write so many lemons in the same story, lol), and I like your style of writing too (is it correctly, uh? :-/)
It's clear that the characters are OOC (shade.... I love these charac' they are my favourites) but the story is cute... many sex, well... but cute! Except that I'm sad for my poor Gaara... Will Naruto leave him? And what about the many years of suffering? He has the right to be a bit happy, hasn't he? Buhuuu T-T (Ok... I prefer Gaara, and I think that Naruto and him are a better couple... But in your fic, he's so violent.... in opposite of Sasuke, who is sweat and gentle... Arf, why is this world so harsh??, lol)
Well, I'm expecting for the next chapter, gnéé héhéhé!!!! I'm really impatient!
I love very much your fanfiction, though I don't read a lot of R-rating fanfic (I didn't think that it was possible to write so many lemons in the same story, lol), and I like your style of writing too (is it correctly, uh? :-/)
It's clear that the characters are OOC (shade.... I love these charac' they are my favourites) but the story is cute... many sex, well... but cute! Except that I'm sad for my poor Gaara... Will Naruto leave him? And what about the many years of suffering? He has the right to be a bit happy, hasn't he? Buhuuu T-T (Ok... I prefer Gaara, and I think that Naruto and him are a better couple... But in your fic, he's so violent.... in opposite of Sasuke, who is sweat and gentle... Arf, why is this world so harsh??, lol)
Well, I'm expecting for the next chapter, gnéé héhéhé!!!! I'm really impatient!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh..heh....
awwwwwwwwww..... sasunaru next? ok!
hahaha.... sasu so much like so... calm. lol ^^
awwwwwwwwww..... sasunaru next? ok!
hahaha.... sasu so much like so... calm. lol ^^
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O woah... this is... the most intense NARUTO fic I've EVER READ!! I congratulate you!! This is the ONLY Naruto fic that made me all TINGLY ... I dunno WHY I felt tingly but I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! And erm... *coughs* Will you be.. *coughs again* adding any 'thing' to Itachi // Naruto? *hint hint* I have NEVER read a VERY satisfying Itachi/Naruto 'moment' SO PLEASE?! Instead of SasuNaru... How about a bit of ItacNaru!? ^-^ BUWAHAHAHAHA!!! If you DO~ I KNOW IT'LL BE REALLY SATISFYING!!! Pretty Please!? And I LOVE Garra/Naruto!!! Shall any of the OTHER pretty boys be appearing?
ARGH!!! I need MORE!!!! ^_^ I name this as top 3!!! OF -ALL- of the fics I've EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GO GARRA/NARUTO AND ITACHI/NARUTO!!! I like SasuNaru.. but... I've read so many of them that I've kind of lost interest in it >_< Not that I don't mind it all that much ^_^ Well... SEE YOU!!! Could you PLEASE EMAIL me when you update!? I won't know otherwise <_<;;;;
Thank You~!
ARGH!!! I need MORE!!!! ^_^ I name this as top 3!!! OF -ALL- of the fics I've EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GO GARRA/NARUTO AND ITACHI/NARUTO!!! I like SasuNaru.. but... I've read so many of them that I've kind of lost interest in it >_< Not that I don't mind it all that much ^_^ Well... SEE YOU!!! Could you PLEASE EMAIL me when you update!? I won't know otherwise <_<;;;;
Thank You~!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
REVIEWING AGAIN because part of it was cut off ^_^;;
O_O woah... this is... the most intense NARUTO fic I've EVER READ!! I congratulate you!!
This is the ONLY Naruto fic that made me all TINGLY ... I dunno WHY I felt tingly but
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! And erm... *coughs* Will you be.. *coughs again*
adding any 'thing' to Itachi // Naruto? *hint hint* I have NEVER read a VERY satisfying Itachi/Naruto
'moment' SO PLEASE?! Instead of SasuNaru... How about a bit of ItacNaru!? ^-^ BUWAHAHAHAHA!!!
If you DO~ I KNOW IT'LL BE REALLY SATISFYING!!! Pretty Please!? And I LOVE Garra/Naruto!!! Shall
any of the OTHER pretty boys be appearing?
ARGH!!! I need MORE!!!! ^_^ I name this as top 3!!! OF -ALL- of the fics I've EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GO GARRA/NARUTO AND ITACHI/NARUTO!!! I like SasuNaru.. but... I've read so many of them
that I've kind of lost interest in it >_< Not that I don't mind it all that much ^_^ Well... SEE YOU!!!
Could you PLEASE EMAIL me when you update!? I won't know otherwise.. and THANK YOU!
O_O woah... this is... the most intense NARUTO fic I've EVER READ!! I congratulate you!!
This is the ONLY Naruto fic that made me all TINGLY ... I dunno WHY I felt tingly but
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! And erm... *coughs* Will you be.. *coughs again*
adding any 'thing' to Itachi // Naruto? *hint hint* I have NEVER read a VERY satisfying Itachi/Naruto
'moment' SO PLEASE?! Instead of SasuNaru... How about a bit of ItacNaru!? ^-^ BUWAHAHAHAHA!!!
If you DO~ I KNOW IT'LL BE REALLY SATISFYING!!! Pretty Please!? And I LOVE Garra/Naruto!!! Shall
any of the OTHER pretty boys be appearing?
ARGH!!! I need MORE!!!! ^_^ I name this as top 3!!! OF -ALL- of the fics I've EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GO GARRA/NARUTO AND ITACHI/NARUTO!!! I like SasuNaru.. but... I've read so many of them
that I've kind of lost interest in it >_< Not that I don't mind it all that much ^_^ Well... SEE YOU!!!
Could you PLEASE EMAIL me when you update!? I won't know otherwise.. and THANK YOU!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* wow..this is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read...please continue!!! Please I beg of you
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES i love it! keep going! aww this is so sad! poor sasuke. i hope naru chooses him.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Just me not everyone, awesome going to bring Itachi in HOT!!!!
That idea of Gaara+Sasuke good...
How bout they go to test each-other to see if the others fit for Naruto.
Sasuke going to Gaara to tell him off, and Gaara thinks he can smooth talk his way out of it.
Sasuke takes the defence, then insults Gaara's sex or some shit, Gaara gets to close starting
to proove he's worthy.
Hey! Mabe Naruto walks in and is not angry but feels they don't want him anymore.
And the 2 still in their horny states take him in willingly.
Just some ideas for this story or another.
Tell me what you think.
not sure if I'll get your email but just in case I gave it to ya!
Just me not everyone, awesome going to bring Itachi in HOT!!!!
That idea of Gaara+Sasuke good...
How bout they go to test each-other to see if the others fit for Naruto.
Sasuke going to Gaara to tell him off, and Gaara thinks he can smooth talk his way out of it.
Sasuke takes the defence, then insults Gaara's sex or some shit, Gaara gets to close starting
to proove he's worthy.
Hey! Mabe Naruto walks in and is not angry but feels they don't want him anymore.
And the 2 still in their horny states take him in willingly.
Just some ideas for this story or another.
Tell me what you think.
not sure if I'll get your email but just in case I gave it to ya!