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for heat

by chy

person april
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhh soooooooooo great!!! gaara and sasuke should come to an agremeant know what i mean???? wink wink
person Horizont
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, great as ever! *drools cuz Itachi appeared just for a few seconds* I like him, kay? XD
Poor Sasuke, this whole heat thing is so hard for him and Gaara uses his advantage... which, for a fangirl, is as good as it can get! ^_^x
*still wants that 3some* :P

I do have a brother, right, but he's not nearly as adorable as those Uchiha brothers...! ^^x
~Horizont
person Caciquegoddess
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! i love thisd story soo much! i just read throught the whole thing and i really shouldnt have because i think im going to die of blood loss! i love SasuNaruGaa! it's soo different and i wish i could write as well as you! Congrats on this fic and i hope you keep writing because with this plot i think that i can only get better! i cant wait until the next update!
person Akira
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your creativity! I could picture all this happening to Naruto. ^-^ I can't wait for the next chapter!

~Akira~
person Leasan
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, sooooo hot!!
Even though I'm a faithful NaruSasu fan I ADORE Gaara, so please, pleeeeeease a threesome :) and soon. Please? *grin*
That would be just totally delicious !!
Oh, and please don't put angst into it, all that confusion about whom to chose is enough, at least for me, in this absolutly gorgous fic :)
It's so damn sexy, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
person castalvia
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SasuNaruGaa *drools* so yummy! I luv your fic, you're a great writer! NEVER GIVE UP ON THIS FIC, i'll have to hunt you down *shifty eyes*
person kai
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, an update!! aww, i like how sauske is all lovey dovey with naruto, it's cute!! XDD oh now, itachi & kisame are after naruto!!! oh no!! what will happen when sauske finds out or gaara or both!! damn, can't wait for the next installment!! thanks for updateing, i love this fic!! XDDDD
person Nesikin
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm glad you like my name. lol It is rather fun to say. XD!!

I've been waiting for an update on this, and now I return to my wait. lol I think you're doing really well, I liked chapter 11. Especially Naruto's thoughts about the three-way. Then again...I like that idea anyway. lol
person blisblop
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you got over the hump in your story(heh)sorry,now it can move forward smoothly.Itachi sama is here !Yahoo!I think he is gonna have his hands full,in more ways than one hopefully,but thats just me.Trios(and Quartets) are just more than fine.I am glad Sasuke is being fair minded about this,smart boy!
person Gingitsune
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Threesome! Threesome! Threesome! Threesome! Hahahha I want my GaaNaruSasu sandwich! *grins* Heheh I am glad that Naruto came clean with Sasuke and Sasuke is not being his usual angsty bitch self and is smart enough not to antagonise Naruto. But poor Gaaru. he is still waiting at Naruto's apt. Hmm........I wonder if Naruto is going to get super turned on by Itachi as well due to his resemblance with Sasuke. More onegai?