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by chy

person angel of darkness
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-ish passed out from major bloodloss with nosebleed-
Gaara: -pokes her with stick- pathetic human
me: Am not!!! oh and great story!!!!! cant wait for next chappie -glomps Gaara-
Gaara : damnit get off me!
me: -anime tears- but gaara i luff you!! -gives author naruto plushie- here for doing such a great job didnt she gaara
Gaara: sure whatever just GET. OFF. ME.
me: fine long as you compliment the story
Gaara: fine, -turns to author- your story is the best story in the world.
me: i luff you gaara!!!
ehhhh yea im crazy but i luff ure story!!!!
person akuma_river
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap. Man this is going to turn out real bad.

I am hoping for a shared relationship with Naruto and Sasuke and Gaara, perhaps a 3p?

Love the story. Want a happy ending. Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
person Kai
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!! (btw, the way to tell the diff between us is i always say love ya! or love it! at the end of my review, and, i'm the younger Kai)
WHEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAANARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE YA!!!
Kai
person germaine(still 2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay....I still hate naruto....just dump Sasuke if you're going to fuck your brains out with gaara....god...I never thought I would hate him this much...
And Gaara seams so fucking possessive...I dunno, but it dosen't seams like he gives a shit about Naruto's feelings....hell, I hate them both in this story...-___-...

I mean...I don't even hate Sakura in this fic...and that's a bad thing....cause I tend to hate her in every fic I read/write....oh well....continue soon....kill naruto if needed...seriously, you should....kill him slowly!

I really need to read something to make me love him again..TT__TT
person Sukara
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Pokes Gaara's now deceased body*..Gaara-san...*Pokes again with a stick this time* GAARA!!! *Does CPR*LIIIIVVVVVEE!!!
person Sukara(Again)
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make that Naruto-san!!! I got mixed up. @_@ *Has bad memory* @_@
person Kori Nibiki
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I admit it was lacking.... but maybe only in length. It was still a good chapter and am looking forward to your next update. Keep up the good work. Ja!
person Billy
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much!!!!!
So creative fusing the animal insticts into Naruto.
Sasuke sure has competion.
Lav Ya!
-Billy
)^_____^(
person kai
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww...poor gaara! and sasuke! XD yes, now naruto will find out whats wrong with him!
yes, there are 2 kai's! XP
UPDATE SOON!!
person Gingitsune
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. Torn between two guys. Well not exactly since he seems more keen on Sasuke. But I don't like to see Gaara hurt so I do hope that you have a satisfactory ending for the three of them. Heheh Jiraiya is really perverted ne? Lol. More onegai?