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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Go you!!! d(^-^)b LOL, I really liked this chapter, though I do feel bad for poor Sasu-kun.......I wonder how he'll react when he learns that Naru-kun is in heat? *evil grin* Oh, and I just love how you've worked Kyuubi into the equation -- very nice!!! *winks* Yup, I caught on to who Naruto's "dreams" are about....not that hard, actually.......and no, that pun was not intended, lol. ^___~ Keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tsunde has a good idea yeah.More lime the better.I am proud of how advanced Sasuke is being about this,it is heart warming.Now if we can just get him to absorb some of Naruto's attraction to Gaara
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I freaking love this story. I love the plot and the coupling. But I can't decide which couple is hotter, Gaara&Naruto or Sasuke&Naruto.....oh well I'll just stick with both or all three of them together. Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm starting to really hate Naruto....what about Sasuke? Hell I thought I'd never say this but Naruto doesn't fucking deserv Sasuke after this...It's a great fic anyway, you don't see a lot of GaaNaru nowadays....Continue soon!
Ja!
Ja!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes,intense is good,the tree scene was a tad familiar but you followed it up with action and they were affectionate so thats cool in my book.Yummy hot stuff....yummy.....h..o...t ...s ...t... ....u...........f..
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chap 3 Why is Sakura allowed to sexually harass Sasuke all the time?Why doesn't he just break sorry accidentally twist her baby finger?.What she is doing isn't cute or OK.it is a power trip.Her actions are morally deplorable and illegle in Canada for one!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe, Naruto dreams of Sasuke *evil laugh* even though we all knew that, haven't we?
/"Think of Sakura.Yeah. Sakura in a bathing suit. Eww. That did it."/ THAT WAS FUNNY!! That made me laugh my head off!
GREAT CHAPTER!!
Sasuke was worried, Aww.
/"Think of Sakura.Yeah. Sakura in a bathing suit. Eww. That did it."/ THAT WAS FUNNY!! That made me laugh my head off!
GREAT CHAPTER!!
Sasuke was worried, Aww.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just got one simple word for ya,
'INTENCE' *fans self*
'INTENCE' *fans self*
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY GAARA AND NARUTONESS!! Naruto IS Gaara's! HE IS!!
OH YEAH GAARA/NARU! ...Hm.. but i wonder what Sasuke will do if he finds out what happened?
Oh, the drama.
OH YEAH GAARA/NARU! ...Hm.. but i wonder what Sasuke will do if he finds out what happened?
Oh, the drama.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my GOD this is sooooo hot, i love this story. having both garraXnaruto and sasukeXnaruto fucking in the same story is GREAT!!!!. and i love how descriptive every scene is *wink wink* please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next, but please don't make naruto choose between the two, i love the fact that naruto loves both sasuke and garra. i hope they find a way to all be together, perhaps we'd get a threesome hehe *that'd be sooooo fucking hot!!!!*