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by chy

person crystal
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a good chapter and I don't hate you. I think sasuke delt with things rather well, for the situation
person BloodBathAngel
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you r soooo good at this!
you need to write more ASAP PLEASE!!!!
see ya!
Blood
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm more worried about Gaara. How is he able to keep in control better?
>_>...when does the threesome stuff happen? Is there any part where it'll just be Sas/Gaa?
person Billy
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person silverfox
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a amazing chapter
so please update asap k
cant wait to see what happens next
person Okubyo Uzumaki
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww....this is so sad....;_; please update soon so that I can find out what happens with Sasuke and Naruto!! ....and so that i can read a nummy sasugaarnaru~! ^^- but that has noooothing to do with it!!! *whistles innocently* btw, this is really really good. i like it a lot! thank you for posting this!! *bows* ^^-

~Okubyo Uzumaki
person yukiko
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooooo need more !! makle sure gaara don't find him.

so it is the kyuubi that making him horny. aaa mating season
person Sukara
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sad!!!!!!!!!!!! ;-; I'm crying...*Makes Gaara voodoo doll and starts poking pins all over* Bwhahaha!!
person roni-chan
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaahaha this made my cry a little when i read it. poor naru-chan. but sasuke's right.
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello. i love this story with all the lemons, the plot, the yaoi, and everything. i think you should get some neji/naruto action. i know that has nothing to do with the plot, or if you might not like this pairing, but it's just me talking. i still love your story. please update as soon as humanly possible^_^V