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for heat

by chy

person ladyraebef
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O you evil evil person living us nice people hanging like that! well... u did give us a lovely sasunaru and an even better gaanaru so i guess i can forgive you as long as you write more ^^
person yukiko
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaah now it's confusing O.O

and for when the sasunarugaara lemon :P I'm living for it
person Kai
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh.....there's gonna be a bitch-slap war now!!! heheheh
LOVE IT!!
Love ya!
Kai
person kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*scrolls back up to the top* So that's a lime! I've heard people mention them before but I never figured out what they were just figured it was something similar to a lemon (why do they use fruits, when you think about it?)

EEEEEEE! A confrontations coming! I'm wondering how Sasuke will react when he finds out that he DIDN'T get to Naruto's appartment before the demon boys humped like bunnies. *dances with happiness* ANd you update so quickly! I can't tell you how loud my WOOT! was when I checked my favorite stories for updates tonight and found Heat at the top. I hope this keeps up.
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you update fast. Not bad just fekt short. Poor Gaara. I don't think I'll ever be a fan of Sasuke lol. Nice fic though. looking foward to more.
person avanhorn
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! You're killing me! This was really great! I loved it! Write more! Soon! I love sweet Sasuke, but I know that when he finds out (everyone always finds out, right?) it's going to break his heart! But don't stop! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person yasu
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww i really really love ur story *_* i really do ~~~ +hugs story+ :3
person akuma_river
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn... Poor Naruto.
Having two possessive guys after him. Both he wants. One he loves, another he might.
And they so don't want to share.
Poor Naruto.


Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person Yami Jay
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More likely that the damn fox is in heat... Anyway, way the go!
person fyredevyl
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking your story, even with how fast it's moving along. I can't wait until you get all three of them in bed together. There will probably be even more bloodshed. *Snickers* Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.