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by chy

person chem chick
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Absolutely loved it! I'm not sure how I feel about Naruto and Gaara (what can I say? Sasuke's my man) but I still like how you wrote it very much and I can't wait to see what's going to happen when Sasuke finds out. If he does. Please update soon!
person animefx
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah! so good! will naruto end up with gaara or sasuke? or is this gonna be a threesome fic? i hope so! i haven't seen any good ones that involve these characters. anyway, i love how fast you update, so please update soon!
person Tsugath
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mou, can we have a SasuNaru scene again soon?
person yasu
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww *_* gaara s so cute ...

i love ur story =^-^=
person Kai
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*licks lips* lovvvvvvvely.......*purr* i can't wait to see what kind of fight gaara and sasuke get into, with the blonde dying to jump them! Positively yummy!
Love always, my now-fave author
Kai
person FlameArchanist
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You still need a beta. If you want I'll do it for you. Nice little addition with our beloved panda eyed lunatic. I actually have a couple ideas to make Sakura's life more hellish. Good work so far just be careful about your tenses.
person Shaddow
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where's the bit where Sasuke fucks Naruto through the floor? And the bit where Gaara and Sasuke fight over Naruto? Would be funny to see Naruto submit to them both, beg both of them to take him like a slutty uke.
person macy
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hwaa!! i honestly didn't expect this chapter to have a gaa/naru lemon at the end O___O!! What a hoooot surprise! Seriously, that was intense! *fans myself* Hrm...I sense trouble!! Tsktsk..Naruto's so in demand (by totally hot boys nonetheless). Interesting to know how things will work out. Hehehehe... You made me drool, so now I'm drooling for more!! LOL. Can't wait till the next chapter ^^ Thanks!!!
person NejiDreagon
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O oommgg i nearly fdell over when i read chapter 2 XD It was awesome. I love the way you write smut ^^
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SasuNaru all the way!! buu GaaraNaru!! ....sorry... :/