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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock ^.^ you updated so fast. This is so cute and funny. I can't wait to see the GaaraNaru lemon! But I'm still a die-hard fan of SasuNaru. *Waves SasuNaru flag* YAY
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock ^.^ you updated so fast. This is so cute and funny. I can't wait to see the GaaraNaru lemon! But I'm still a die-hard fan of SasuNaru. *Waves SasuNaru flag* YAY
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna try and guess.........the only two that I can think of is Sasuke and maybe Kuuybi in human form, but hey, that can surely happen........I think......anyways, later and can't wait to see Gaara!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this smut scene, much better than the last one.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have 3 words for you
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RO
TIC!!!!!!!
great stuff, i had to stop in the middle of that and get some water to cool off. man there's nothing else i can say other than that. UPDATE SOON!!!!
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TIC!!!!!!!
great stuff, i had to stop in the middle of that and get some water to cool off. man there's nothing else i can say other than that. UPDATE SOON!!!!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, that was pretty hot! it's true that i wouldn't expect that to happen in only the second chapter, but it works. i'm curious now as to what exactly their relationship will be like now that they've slept together. can't wait til you update!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was pretty intense! *wipes drool* seriously, my mouth became watery (or drool-y?) while i was reading this! that was hot!! ooh...can't wait till the sand siblings enter the picture.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sexy as hell...Lol, I can't wait for the GaaraNaru! GaaraNaru is so sexy! And uke Naruto is so cute.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THAT WAS SO YUMMY!! *nosebleed*
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't take this the wrong way, but you should get a beta. There are a lot of grammar mistakes and mispellings in your story. I know you're just writing for fun, but these types of things can be distracting. I almost didn't give your story a chance because of all the errors.