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for heat

by chy

person bianca
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holly shit every chapter naruto is trying to do someone or is getting done by someone. XD God he needs to breath you know. Dame I would be so soar after all of this was done god dame. XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
person avila7989
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSEOM FIC!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!! I CAINT WAIT FOR THE THREE WAY!!
person Chibi
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
......Wow, I've read this whole story and I think it was amazing. I wonder what happens.
person Anna
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far is great!! I want to see what will happen next! Please update ASAP!
person Dum de dum de dum
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh i just finished the entire story (so far) and i am liking what i am seeing hehe
person Kuu-ish
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mew ;) Great chappy! -reviews again- ;p
person Shou'na
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story with a passion! AAHHH! Its fricken sexy man. Hah, please please please please update! Ahhh! The possesivness of Gaara is wicked, and who would have thought of Sasuke as a gentle lover. Meh *shrugs* LOVE IT!
MARRY ME! XD
person Tsukiyomi
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Just wish you would update it. I think you are staying very true to the characters. But I think Naruto is becoming almost a wishy washy little slut. Sasuke and Naruto should just come out and say that they love each other to each others faces. And it should be outwardly known to everyone that Gaara is just a lust brought on by the heat cycle. It seems like how Naruto speaks sometimes makes it seem like he is only lusting after the Uchiha to. I know he is talking to Gaara, But Naruto is always truthful in the anime and he should be able to tell Gaara and Sasuke exactely how he feels, even if he is afraid of dissapointing. Otherwise I love it and please update soon. I'm realy wanting to read the threesome.
person BlueDhampir
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Totally wowed. You are a true master! The plot is divine. I'm on the edge of my seat and I hope the next chapter will be up soon! Will we get to see a nummy threesome? I hope so!!
person Loquora
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love it! It has a little bit of everything and it's all so fun. I love the way you've written Gaara, usually he ends up very OOC. I can't wait to see what Jiraiya has for them! Please update soon!!!