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Vamp, this is the most awesome Naruto fic I've ever read! I had to read all the chapters first; I couldn't stop! This fic had me laughing, saying 'oh shit!' many times, and saying coments to no one but myself. Please, write more! I really hope that our favorite blonde can *ahem* come up with a plan... -_^ That would be nice to see... EM

P.S. : In case you haven't noticed by my own fic, for some reason, my perv ass just love threesome and more stories... *blushes* O_O;

very cute!!!!!

XD update!!! if i don't get results soon, i will be affected by the pheromones in the air!!! XD bwahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! >w<

Yummy...Funny...I love it...You're writing has improved since there is minimal mistakes in the last paragraph as compared to the others before hand...The consistent mistake almost all throughout the story is the use of the word "then"...What makes it wrong is that you use that word when constructing a comparative sentence, where you should use the word "than"...I found a lot of other minimal grammatic errors (please don't kill me) but I have found no reason to criticize your form of writing...You write a wonderful, catchy story that makes the reader impatient to read the next addition...Please continue with the story...i really hate authors who don't finish stories *stabs those authors with a knife*...Anyway, if you still need a BETA, I'm volunteering for the job...If you're interested, you can see my email add in my profile... :D

yes your writting is getting better. more discriptive. xD and DEFINATELY helps with the lemons. and i love how you put so much emotion into the reasons for the lemons coming about....so is naruto really just going after gaara because kyuubi prefers him, or is it becausee he feels almost as strongly twords him as he does for sasuke? and what the hell are itachi and kiisama (or something...>< i just like calling him shark boy.lol) doing? i mean i know they want kyuubi but why haven't they gotten naruto yet?.....it's probably because of all the fussing everyone's doing. stupid naruto whining about not getting any love. *rolls eyes* can't see how much the (wiser and better people for it) elders of the town love him? and the fact that the hokage has a soft spot for him should totally make him nuts with joy. lol oh well.....i do hope naruto/kyuubi's idea of aa 3way worx out before naru-kun is captured bye itachi shark-boy. YAY I SAID IT! *dagger barely missed me grazing cheek* o.0;.......gtg he's gonna come and kill me if i don't. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Damn!! That was a good story so far. I think it is really interesting. Your writing is getting better as you progress, not just the lemons, everything is. It really shows. It would be really interesting if after Naruto finally picks who he wants, the other person would end up with Kakashi. He has GREAT yaoi potential in this story. And I would LOVE to read a lemon with him. This is actually the first Naruto fic I have read. Keep up the good work. tsukiyomi_chan@hotmail.com

This is such an awesome story!!!!!!!!!!! It rox, and the yaoi is incredible!!!! 10000000/10

~KD~

Hay up date!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T-T I need it PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!T-T an up date......That's all I want....just a simple up date............

Ouch,

I've never read any heavier piece of crap.

Please stop for the sake of everybody.

omgomg omg lololo rofl lolol omg omg omg

This is so l33t omg omg please continue lololololololololol