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for Hitting on Sasuke

by YuriKuro

person noeru
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello !^^
i like your story. i found the second 'illusion' very funny. naruto's reaction was...superb^^ but i have a question : are you french or do you speak french? cause you write some words in french, so...
(i'm much etter in french than in english, so sorry if i made a lot of mistakes^^)

I'am waiting for your next chapter !
good luck
person nicole
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story lol ! keep it going plzzzz
person kataru
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahawahhwahh! that was cuuute!!! narutp so freak ah... innocent... he's cute when he's like that... some clueless guy.. yay!
person Mizuka
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW love this new chapter!!!! Update soon please!!!! More lemons yeah!!!! ^_^
person Chuche
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh so more visions ne? Poor Naru-kun!!! But woa, Sasuke is such a bastard, but now we know that he really like Naruto X3

Hehehe lest see what comes next!!! I hope they 'do' it again.... And this for real time..... It won´t be bad to be another vision.... Hehehe and then more teasing time from Naruto!!! Teasing is the best XD

Ah well that will be too long, this is great so go on!!! Update soon!!! =^.^=

My rate for you: +++++

You deserve it!!
person roni
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over* aaahahahahhh!!
person blisblop
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a joy to read from begining to end .I really liked the end,made me sqirm.Do it again!Please?
person satomi yajima
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohh boy your stuff is hard when you want it to be hard
I am not a big fan of guy-guy fucking
it has its moments of laughter , still pretty good
I am looking foward to your other projects
Keep up the good work
person Demon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was great ^^
person Kai
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*purr* For a minute there, I was sure that my heart had moved to between my thighs,
because that's where my pulse was beating, I swear!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
LOVE YA!!
Kai