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Loved it.

So now I yell out my desire. SEQUEL!!!!!


Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.

Now Sasuke gets to be top... lol

you my dear Yurikai-sama are my god....i bow down to thee *worships*

that was the most hottest yaoi fic i have ever read you know why? simple because most of those DAMN Author's love naruto uke they just cant see how sasuke is sooo uke the whole blushing thing was cute btw ^__~ are you gonna update!!!oh yes yes yes please do so onegai!!
please dont let this fic die T.T i love it very much!!!

update or else i'll haunt you down and it wont be pretty!!!*smirks and blows a kiss*

you rock my socks!!!!

uke sasuke and seme naruto 4life!!!

THAT WAS SO COOL AND I loved your lemon it gave me chills and only a few lemons do that I am the sex goddess so you should be proud in your lemon. great job!!!!!!
well I hope you update soon (yummy naruto the uke) hehehe well what are you wanting for get going on the next chappie Onegai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Looves Arry

I LOVE UR LEMON it was great.i can't wait to see the next chapter keep up the good work

Hot story. The whole thing with the Mizukage was a cool idea. :)

Just two things (hope, you didn't mind):
1.) "shaburu kudasei" seems to be the not so exact form. In my opinion you should use the "te-form" here, means the correct term is: shabutte kudasei.
2.) I think its effortless but please try not to use "koi" as a synonym for lover. "Koi" could mean lover but there are a lot of other definitions/translations (in most cases "koi" means carp... And I don't see Sasuke call Naruto a carp when he is at least a little romantic). If you insist on using Japanese terms then please use koi-bito which really exclusively means lover :)

So, then keep up the good ("hot") work :D

LOL... Here I am, trying to lecture you about Japanese and things. And then its me who write such a twisted English (after all, its not my native language neither is Japanese). Replace "effortless" with "futile" and bear with all the remaining mistakes :)

great story!!! hope theres still more cuz i cant wait to read some more.

That was great! I can't tell english isn't really comfortable for you, only a few spelling errors here and there. The lemon was a lot of fun to read and I feel the characters are pretty realistic.
Keep up the good work! I hope you'll continue this story, it's very fun ^^

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!! This story is so much fun!! I love it when Naruto and Sasuke are all flustered. ^__^ You just made my day. Now make my week by posting MORE!

Very cool update soon lemon lemon lemon I need a Lemon or lime