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SOOOOOOOOOOOO funny
I was peeing in my pants
you can do better
Keep up the good work
and keep up the funny sentences
your story is fuckin' funny

oh yes yes :3 to be contiued!!!!*gives cookies* uke sasuke uke sasuke uke sasuke *dances* you made my day!!

Thank you and please update REAL soon i cant wait!!!yatta uke sasukness!!!!XDwoooo

ok, so there were some grammatical errors, but i usually disregard that when i'm reading a story. and since english is not your first language, it's no big deal. now, about the story. i think sasuke is a little OC, but it's interesting to see him lose his cool like that. naruto's also a little out of character in the way he taunts sasuke. it's kind of hard to picture naruto being the one to tease sasuke like that and for sasuke to freak out about it. to me, it seems more natural to be the other way around, with sasuke teasing the pissed off naruto. but...i do think you should continue your story. i don't want to seem like i'm dissing your story, because i really enjoyed reading it. although i do think they're both a little out of character, i would like to see how far naruto is willing to go to get a rise out of sasuke. things could get very...ahem...interesting, ya know? so i'd just like to let you know that if you're willing to continue, i'm willing to read. toodles!

continue XD please!? please!? XD wating for the hardsweatyyaoi XD

sasuke uke YAY!!!!!

That was awesome, and you'd better write more as fast as you can! I loved it! PLEASE!!! It's too good to not write more!

woooot wooo0ot woooot Cheers for french canadians (I'm one too......... well a bilingual one ....) Your grammar is okay! Your story is cool...........but too short. You should continue it!! And I'm intrigued by the other story you mentioned........ en tout cas... bonne continuation!!!!!! (vive le québec!! and montreal!!)

Interesting...that was kind of hot and has the potential to be pretty cool. Let us see what you can do with it.

muwahahahahah!!! usually i'm not into the yaori stuff, but it's done wonderfully, so i'd say continue please!!!

u are EBIL! >_>
u seem to like teasing as much as your Naruto does :(
keep on writing or u might have to face a ff-maniac with a gun to force u to keep on ;P *lol*
very good job, and I really really hope u'll take this fic further :))
baba Lithi ^^/)