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please continue...it's really cute

hrm, it was cute! ^^ i'd read a second chapter if you ever make one. Although, i don't get why the two boys would be sharing the same boba drink in the first place if they're just friends.

Hmmm...personly, I thought it was kawaii. ^-^ And now, I want that drink. O_O
Sasuke was a bit OOC though. (Bah, he is in my stories too. >_> ) So I'd suggest working on his character a bit. ^^
But all-in-all, I thought it was reeaally cute. ^^

Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (<--- thumbs up, fyi) Now then, on to the more interesting stuff: questions!!! Alright, here we go..... ^___~ What, exactly, is a "tapioca jelly bubble"? I've never heard of those before, and they sounded quite.......interesting, to say the least!!! Are they like actual bubbles, or more "substantial"? (I'm inclined to believe the latter due to the fact that said bubble lasted though being fought over and then transfered from Sasu-kun's mouth to Naru-kun's.) Just idle curiosity....... ^___^

As for the whole "Canadian-French" thing -- do you speak French? I'm assuming that you do because you mentioned it in the first place, but just in case you don't (for some odd, unexplained reason that my tired brain can not conjure up at the moment) I'll type this in English. The truth of the matter is that I'm too lazy and the lack of accents is bothering the heck out of me..... ^___~ I'm not French, but I am learning it and plan to major in French communications when I go to colllege. I've only taken 3 years so far (due to the fact that I moved my freshman year of highschool and was unable to complete French 1 that year.....and am currently a senior *yay!!!*) but I love the language and the culture, etc, and I can't wait to visit both France and Canada!!! Do you live in Canada or in the US? And if it is the latter, do you have any family in Canada and/or have you ever visited there? *tries to stem her excitement and go back to what she was originally talking about* Ah, yes -- your fic! ^^ Sorry about that.......

Um, well, as I mentioned waaaaay up there *points to the top of her review* I really liked it, so I definetly think that you should continue it!!! Actually, I can't wait to find out what happens next (as well as to read your other fic) so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Au revoir!!!

Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (<--- thumbs up, fyi) Now then, on to the more interesting stuff: questions!!! Alright, here we go..... ^___~ What, exactly, is a "tapioca jelly bubble"? I've never heard of those before, and they sounded quite.......interesting, to say the least!!! Are they like actual bubbles, or more "substantial"? (I'm inclined to believe the latter due to the fact that said bubble lasted though being fought over and then transfered from Sasu-kun's mouth to Naru-kun's.) Just idle curiosity....... ^___^

As for the whole "Canadian-French" thing -- do you speak French? I'm assuming that you do because you mentioned it in the first place, but just in case you don't (for some odd, unexplained reason that my tired brain can not conjure up at the moment) I'll type this in English. The truth of the matter is that I'm too lazy and the lack of accents is bothering the heck out of me..... ^___~ I'm not French, but I am learning it and plan to major in French communications when I go to colllege. I've only taken 3 years so far (due to the fact that I moved my freshman year of highschool and was unable to complete French 1 that year.....and am currently a senior *yay!!!*) but I love the language and the culture, etc, and I can't wait to visit both France and Canada!!! Do you live in Canada or in the US? And if it is the latter, do you have any family in Canada and/or have you ever visited there? *tries to stem her excitement and go back to what she was originally talking about* Ah, yes -- your fic! ^^ Sorry about that.......

Um, well, as I mentioned waaaaay up there *points to the top of her review* I really liked it, so I definetly think that you should continue it!!! Actually, I can't wait to find out what happens next (as well as to read your other fic) so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Au revoir!!!

Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (<--- thumbs up, fyi) Now then, on to the more interesting stuff: questions!!! Alright, here we go..... ^___~ What, exactly, is a "tapioca jelly bubble"? I've never heard of those before, and they sounded quite.......interesting, to say the least!!! Are they like actual bubbles, or more "substantial"? (I'm inclined to believe the latter due to the fact that said bubble lasted though being fought over and then transfered from Sasu-kun's mouth to Naru-kun's.) Just idle curiosity....... ^___^

As for the whole "Canadian-French" thing -- do you speak French? I'm assuming that you do because you mentioned it in the first place, but just in case you don't (for some odd, unexplained reason that my tired brain can not conjure up at the moment) I'll type this in English. The truth of the matter is that I'm too lazy and the lack of accents is bothering the heck out of me..... ^___~ I'm not French, but I am learning it and plan to major in French communications when I go to colllege. I've only taken 3 years so far (due to the fact that I moved my freshman year of highschool and was unable to complete French 1 that year.....and am currently a senior *yay!!!*) but I love the language and the culture, etc, and I can't wait to visit both France and Canada!!! Do you live in Canada or in the US? And if it is the latter, do you have any family in Canada and/or have you ever visited there? *tries to stem her excitement and go back to what she was originally talking about* Ah, yes -- your fic! ^^ Sorry about that.......

Um, well, as I mentioned waaaaay up there *points to the top of her review* I really liked it, so I definetly think that you should continue it!!! Actually, I can't wait to find out what happens next (as well as to read your other fic) so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Au revoir!!!

Ahh!!! *flips out* I am sooooo sorry about the "triple review" thing -- I actually wrote about 3 times as much as that, but for some reason it isn't showing up....... *pouts* That, and my computer enjoys tormenting me. XP I'll try e-mailing it to you -- maybe that will work........

Ici on parle francais!!! ^___^ Ah, j'espere....... (attempts to figure out how to add in the accents but gives up when her new lap-top starts giving her problems) ^^ Hi! First off, let me mention that I reeeeally liked this -- very clever and well done, not to mention funny and cute, too!!! There were a few grammar mistakes that were due to your aforementioned "problem", but over-all it was fine -- and the mistakes were easy to correct mentally as I read through it, so it's all good! d(^-^)b (<--- thumbs up, fyi) Now then, on to the more interesting stuff: questions!!! Alright, here we go..... ^___~ What, exactly, is a "tapioca jelly bubble"? I've never heard of those before, and they sounded quite.......interesting, to say the least!!! Are they like actual bubbles, or more "substantial"? (I'm inclined to believe the latter due to the fact that said bubble lasted though being fought over and then transfered from Sasu-kun's mouth to Naru-kun's.) Just idle curiosity....... ^___^

As for the whole "Canadian-French" thing -- do you speak French? I'm assuming that you do because you mentioned it in the first place, but just in case you don't (for some odd, unexplained reason that my tired brain can not conjure up at the moment) I'll type this in English. The truth of the matter is that I'm too lazy and the lack of accents is bothering the heck out of me..... ^___~ I'm not French, but I am learning it and plan to major in French communications when I go to colllege. I've only taken 3 years so far (due to the fact that I moved my freshman year of highschool and was unable to complete French 1 that year.....and am currently a senior *yay!!!*) but I love the language and the culture, etc, and I can't wait to visit both France and Canada!!! Do you live in Canada or in the US? And if it is the latter, do you have any family in Canada and/or have you ever visited there? *tries to stem her excitement and go back to what she was originally talking about* Ah, yes -- your fic! ^^ Sorry about that.......

Um, well, as I mentioned waaaaay up there *points to the top of her review* I really liked it, so I definetly think that you should continue it!!! Actually, I can't wait to find out what happens next (as well as to read your other fic) so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Au revoir!!!

No!!! Not again!!! *kicks computer* Bad!!! Stop that!!! ^^ Sorry, about that, once again......... *bangs head on wall*