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for Guardian Angel

by Mesmerisz

person macy
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hwaa!! nice chapter. definitely interesting now that haku, neji, lee and the sand nins are here. weee...can't wait to read the next chapter even though you did say that you're going to kill some characters. good luck with school, and take your time with the updates. with all the doubles you're taking, like wooooowww!! That's some serious studying!
person Scented Candles
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter, I loved it. I love the way you write, your style is so great, it just leaves me simply breathless. there are times in this fic that I forget to breathe and others where I'm at the edge of my seat. Please update soon! Oh and happy brithday! I hope it's good!
person Trek
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's funny you speak about birthday wish coz today's my 19 birthday. So, hum, update soon? Make this be a very good SasuNaru fic' (and others I really don't care). Your writing is really good and I love your confusing story. I like to see when there is a next that is already think before a chapter (I don't know if I make sens). Anyway, continue to write this story with intelligence, fun, sex, love, violence, etc... :) As for my birthady present, give me good SasuNaru fanfic, fanart and doujinshi and you make me the happiest person in the world XD. (I really do hate when Sasuke is a uke, exept with Itachi)
Ok, hum, sorry for writing such a long and boring review but, hey, it's my birthday and your story put me in a good mood! :)!
Ja!
ps: also sorry if my english is bad coz I'm french.
person silverfox
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good keep up the good work and update soon
person Leasan
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An update, aaah...I love those :)
As I LOVE you story, it's so twisted, complicated and different from the original plot of manga!!!
And the protagonists are simply delectable! I can wait for some GaaraNaru 'moments'...
Update ASAP!!
person Leasan
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeeee!... Great stuff! Funny and gripping.
Let Kiba kick Sasuke's ass, yeah!! Or make him jealous, that would be even better!!
Oh, and how about Gaara falls in love with Naruto, and Naruto is NOT at all insensitive to Gaara's advances???
Oh, that'd be just awesome. And make Sasuke watch! *evil grin*
Wonderful fic, update ASAP!
person kirameki
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, not at all what I was expecting. Very interesting. What is Itachi up to I wonder. xD
person Cloud_Haven
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesin! lol i like the preview...so kaiba, itachi and sasuke like naruto heh this is geting good!
person Jiro
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. But that preview for chapter 4 is litterally STRAIGHT out of the manga 'Doubt!' (volume 2) so I wouldn't use it. SOme people might get testy.
person Emily Saeke
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rawr. Very good, want moremoremore!!!