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for Guardian Angel

by Mesmerisz

person Heather
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww...poor naru-chan in a dress! but man, that was some hot stuff between naruto and sasuke. and was sasuke getting jealous of kiba touching him? hmmm...and then itachi shows up! it just keeps getting better and better. i can't wait for the next chapter cuz the preview seemed really interesting. i love kiba, but i want sasuke to kick some ass. anyways...great chapter. can't wait for more!
person mistressarts
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! Totally up to my expectations! :) Absolutely loved this chapter...though I have to say that Itachi creeps me out. Which means that you wrote him well, 'cause he creeps me out in the manga/anime too. ~_^

May the writer's curse never befall you, and your muse(s) brighten your mind.

..In other words, I wait until the next chapter!

Mistress
person shuchan
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I saw review button.

I pointed and clicked.

I must say thatwiting is really irritating, ESPECIALLY WHEN IT INVOLVES WITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OF DARN GOOD FICTION!!!

Result: you must hurry.

(/>.<)/ \(>.<\)
person phoe-chan the too lazy to longin
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The sneak preview to the fourth part--with Kiba taking Sasuke's advice... I LOVE THAT. That cracked me up. Great job. :)

Phoe-chan the Witty
person Liliath
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I...I..TTvTT *cries* I need a very cold shower...a veru VERY FUCKING COLD SHOWER!! OH DAMN IT!! THAT WAS SO HOT AND HOT AND HOT!! UPDATE!!!!!! TTvTT
person dezzzzzzzzzzzi
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u alredy kno my email..................newayz.....luv ur next chapppy!!!!!!!!! >_< iz so.....so...........so.................................................yaoi..........ea...................lol
newayz......u beder hurry up n finish da next chappy or els..........................>=O it took u lyk 2eva......it beder not take another 3 monthz fo da oder chappyz 2......................................grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
muah muah............good luk

lotsa luv
dezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzi

<3 [its a heart......a sidewayz 1]

ps..............u alredy kno my email.......so i don reeeeeeeeeeeely dink u need 2 kno it again........... =D
person hogo-chan
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so funny! and hot! and amazing! You are amazing! this was such an awesome chapter! and thank you so much for emailing the update! ^_^ I hope you get another chance to update soon!
person Scented Candles
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, I can't wait until you update soon, although the ending was sort of confusing, but the scene with Naruto/Sasuke was delicious *purrss*
person Ry
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...t'is so kawaii in a very disturbing way! <3
person RONE
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THanks for the sneek peek, I cant wait for the next chapter. email me every time you update so i can keep reading your story.