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for Guardian Angel

by Mesmerisz

person silverfox
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man that was interesting and also very amusing keep up the gooe work an update soon
person hogo-chan
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! that was incredible! omg omg! *passes out from excitement* I love this fic so much! and the ending! what a cliffhanger! wowie! that was just so awesome! *swoons* I think... I'm gonna melt! If it's not too much trouble, please email me the notice for your updates! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
person blisblop
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny,I hope the courtship between the two wil not take forever,I mean Sas and his bro! Oh well, dreaming is free.Itachi and Naruto?
person akuma_river
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
person mE
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for some SasuNaru action :DD adn what was with Itachi-Sama..so..Naruto's working for him or something :D hmm..,.interesting :D
person Crystal
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's wonderful! Your characters are very good, very much in character!
person Mistress Arts
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I love this story. And it's fun the way that you fit the Naruto characters from a Julie Garwood story. Eeek! That just makes it more exciting! Can;t wait for the next chapter. Ta Ta!
Mistress
person mitsune
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yosh!!!! not too much action on this chapter please make sasuke-chan a much pervert so that naruto-chan can have some more fun,
i thought naruto was kyuubi? does this mean he doesnt know that he's kyuubi like a second character or something? pleas updte soon
i can know how sasu-chan would "take care " of naru- chan. good luck on the next chapter ja! ^_^.
person kijo kasumi
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drool* I'll be your personal reader if no one else read or reviews. *Love* *Love*
person kkkkkkkkkkk
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, interesting story. I'd like to read more of it before I decided whether I'm crzy about or not, but it's definately leaning more towards the "MORE MORE MORE!" side of my mind. Keep going, eh? I want to know if Naruto's supposed to be one of the goods guys or the bad guys. Is Itachi the 'mastermind' and Naru the Kyubbi theif? ANd if so....why are they helping the poor? I'd expect that from Naruto, but Ichy? ANd aslo: Is Kisame in this too?