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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting chapter
can't wait to see what happens next so update
can't wait to see what happens next so update
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so itachi alive and naruto is working for him? nice! interesting fic, udpate soon!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_________O!!! WHAAAAATTTTTTT???? What's Naruto talking about at the end. Whoa. You got me on that one. What an awesome surprise!! It got me all curious and everything. The fic's going great so far. Heee...can't wait to see how the story develops. Thanks for writing this. =)
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this so far! Nice preview! It got my thought bubble a bubbling...(((What ever would cause such a dialogue to occure?))) I'll deffinately check out your next chapter! Your writing style is enjoyable and the story is thought provoking and unusual. Great job! So...bring on the yum! d(^-^)b
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I love this! I'm so excited! Please write more soon!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow . . . I am awed by your writing, your style, your plot, your EVERYTHING!!! Please, oh please update ASAP because it is fantastic and I am dying to know what is next! Don't leave me hanging here! ^-^ If it's not too much, can you email me when the next chapter is loaded? Thanks so much!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice little story you have spun here! it definately drew me in and it seems to be full of intrigue as well as excitement. hopefully you shall continue to show an adeptness at writing complexity. i look forward to future chapters, lol
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you've certainly put an interesting spin on things. it's really cool to read a completely different take on things from the naruto universe. i definitely wanna stick around to see how things fall into place. so, i can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! how interesting! I cant wait for an update!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i cant wait until the next chapter! usually first chapters are boring, but yours is really interesting. please email me when you update.