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for Eerie Queerie

by Mesmerisz

person akuma_river
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I fan of both series. I can truely say I like this. Keep up the awesome work.


So is Jiriya going to be the pervert monk?

Or what about the other guy that was vying for his love.

Or what about the guy that tried to push him out of the window?

Coolsa.
person kireiyuki
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw...XD that wes hillarious..please update soon
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAH! BAH! UPDATE!!!
person Niki
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is... pretty much complete plagiarism of the manga Eerie Queerie. I thought you might deviate from the plot a little, but you haven't really changed a thing. Instead of writing below-average plagiarized fanfiction, why not just put a plug for the manga at the end of your author's bio, or one of your stories, or something? I started reading this because I thought you might put a new spin on it, but you've just made it a waste of my time by presenting me with a sub standard clone of Eerie Queerie.
person clowangel
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! 'Sasuke-kun, i love you.' I can just imagine Sakura's face. XDDD
person mitsune
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!XD why'd you stop there?!!!!! please update soon cant believe sakura used naruto-chan's body to propose to sasuke-kun!!!!
i wonder how he'll react i hope he says i like you too, but thats too impossible, how but "hmn!"? ne ne ne, update soon ok ? this is a great fic even though its a little fluffy i still want to know how sasuke-kun reacted to "sakura-chan's" confession. Ja! ^_^.
person dezzi
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i juzz reviewed ur other story. diz iz equaly good!!! iz also very kawaii. so sakura iz a gost in diz story....hmmmmm..........very interesting
newayz....keep up the good work and u better put up the next chap. soon! HURRY HURRY HURRY n WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dezzzzi
person animefreak [dezzi]
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u beder hurry up n write da next chapy..........weneva dat happenz........rite? i started 2 write a fic.......da 1st chap....buh lyk im 2 lazy 2 fix dingz up.....so w/e
get on w/ da other story!!! start another story soooooooooooooooon!! >_*
sayonara
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person silverfox
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha very funny chapter please update
person Saki
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um good story btw, just alittle confusion and mispelling on one.... It's "Icha,Icha Paradise" not Ichi,ichi paradise Unless you wanna call it "one, One Paradise" in english..*rubs her head*heh...anyways can't wait for the next chapter. that's all for now.