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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GYAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! OMG, the crackiness! I wub it! please, continue soon!
...wait... Sakura is a ghost? She's dead? HELL YEAH! XDXDXD
...wait... Sakura is a ghost? She's dead? HELL YEAH! XDXDXD
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh.. Eerie Queerie! I have the manga and I loved it! :) Next time, make sure the chapters are a bit longer.. Too short for my taste.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's all right, so far, but a bit short so I can't tell if I like it or not yet. Mind, aside from saying that "Eerie Queerie is not original", wouldn't it clearer to point out that it is in fact the title of an existing manga, and that you're borrowing the plot and replacing the characters with Naruto and co.? I hope your story deviates from the Eerie Queerie manga though, but that's just my opinion. Good luck.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute...very cute. Needs some work though.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should DEFFINTELY continue this, I've read the Eerie Queerie series and I can see, if it's anything at all like that manga, this should be rather amusing to read!
You kinda got me there with Sakura being the ghost, cause in the beginning I thought you just used the title and it wasn't going to follow like the manga, but it did, so yeah, I don't think you could've casted anyone else as Kiyomi... that was her name right? I forgets, anyways, beautifil start, and I'm pretty sure everything else will be just as good.
I bet Mikuni will be Kakashi, ne?
Once a pervert, always a pervert xD
You kinda got me there with Sakura being the ghost, cause in the beginning I thought you just used the title and it wasn't going to follow like the manga, but it did, so yeah, I don't think you could've casted anyone else as Kiyomi... that was her name right? I forgets, anyways, beautifil start, and I'm pretty sure everything else will be just as good.
I bet Mikuni will be Kakashi, ne?
Once a pervert, always a pervert xD
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool start! I can't wait until more comes out.