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for Lovers among Ruins

by mayfaire

person poo_n_pee
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story looks pretty interesting. please continue!!! i'll love to see itachi coming out and being with everyone and their reactions towards him
person poo_n_pee
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story looks pretty interesting. please continue!!! i'll love to see itachi coming out and being with everyone and their reactions towards him
person blisblop
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story.However the use of the word wizened ,it means shrunken from dryness,a mummy is wizend or a very old persons skin is wizend.It can mean the results of a lack of vitality like when you does not use an arm for weeks because of a cast the muscles become wizened.Sasuke does not become wizened in Itachis' arms unless Itachi dehydrated him somehow.ICK.I have seen this word use to mean a temporary loss of strength in other fics but it is just so wrong!Warning,do not improve your vocabulary useing just a fan fic.Another term I see mutilated is reined in,people use reign in and they use it wrong.It is kinda funny one can see how dialects grow...

person evvy
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its is very itneresting. I am glad there is an itasasu fic like this now o.o I look forward to the next chapter so much...:D Sasuke should bring him dango, lol. Itachi:you remember my favorite still? let me show you my thanks....*molest* LOL.
person YuriKuro
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoooOooo......He didin't hate him as much as he thought did he?
And what's up with Tsunade?^^Hope she has good plans for the two brothers! héhé

Normally I'm not into ItaSasu cause every fic I've read by now involving this pairing weren't really the type of fic I like...BUT NOW....OH. MY. GOD. Finally someone who wrote one I actually enjoyed!! GO ItaSasu!!!LOL

And c'mon, you can't be serious about finishing this fic with only 5 chapters...WANT MORE!!!!^__~ héhé
This fic is awsome so keep it on going!!

See ya
person blisblop
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how seductive,the brothers interaction is intreging.What is the Hokage up to?She seems to be encouraging it.Which is fine by me,maybe she wants Sasuke to get information any way he can whether he knows that is what he is doing or not?This is great.The best pairing and the way itachi sets Sasuke off is amazing.Keep it up!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Go you!!! d(^-^)b LOL, I really liked the last two chapters -- very interesting and well done. I can't wait to find out what happens next, so update again ASAP, kk? ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
person faith
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luff you marry me!!! 8D

iam a huge uchihacest fan yum~ anyway please umm update!!*gives cookies and pats*

^__^ kawa~ii fanfic !!!keep it up!!we luff you!!
person Rowan
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. Yhis is the coolest fanfic ever!. I need more for me to survive....please update ASAP! It gave me chills down my back as i read the part where sasuke was looking at Itachi-Kun . I can't wait for the next chapter, you've made my day!
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This starts so good. I am a sucker for ItaSasu. And this has so much potential. Please, update soon?