rate_review Reviews

wow. i actually enjoyed this. :)

I liked it. I think you did a good job.

So romantic!

Very nice. :)

wonderful! i like it! there are so few of fanfics of this couple out there, although they are one of my favorite couple from naruto. i really hope neji does return to her safe and sound. you couldn't be so cruel as to kill him off, right? better not! anyway, is there more? if so, write! nice job and keep up the good work!!!

I enjoyed it. I thought your story a had a lovely poise to it. I agree that writing for TenTen must've been hard, seeing as very little is known about her, but I think you did a lovely job of conveying them. I liked the irony you used in the end, and the whole story itself was quite well written in my opinion. It's refreshing to see a new pairing and using TenTen's POV brought a poignancy to it that made it sweet. Keep up the good work.

~Kir

s0rry I didn't like it. This is not a flame because I really have no idea on how to flame or bash... I just want you to know that I didn't enjoy it. And I think it is knida corny or something and I hate your pairing... maybe that is the main reason why I didn't enjoy it. You write well... I admit that. BUT the pairing is just crappy and it didn't click right away.

I'm making a comment, not a flame. I am not like you guys (nejiten fans...*rolls eyes*)... who bashes/flames/insults nejisaku fans... I really have no idea why that pairing (nejiten) even clicked on you guys... Tenten is just... BORING. blah... wasted so much internet card...

OMIGOD OMIGOD OMIGOD!!! running around screaming like a chicken with its head cut off. this is freaking AWESOM!!!! will you be continuing this one? because if not, it'd be such a waste. (or if not, you definitely gotta write more naruto fanfics) i really admire your writing style. so full of emotions and very descriptive. i love it!!! please, please, PLEASE continue to write more naruto fanfics. you're awesom!!!

It was alright. It's good to see some new material for a neglected pairing, but it still has room for improvement. It seems a bit plain the way it is, although I'm not saying this because I think it needs a graphic lovescene. I'm saying this because it seems to be a bit lacking, like it needs something else to really spark. Unfortunately I'm not a good enough writer to be able to tell you how to make it really good. Wish I could be more help, though.