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for The Problem with Sand

by Evilchiapet25

schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"like horny microscopic koalas" bwahahahahaha! I love your turn of phrase... hehe, better learn to like rough sex Neji boy. lol
person charmpit
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO ROFLMAO ROFLMAO ROFLMAO

How about an encore?
person YvonneandNeji
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That had got to be one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time. I was laughing my ass off the entire thing. But really, Gaara smearing SUGAR on UNCOOKED meat was...Er... *shudders* Sick. How will Neji-baby eat? The letter was by far the best part. Kudos.
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Gaara shoved Neji’s face back to his lap. “Shut up and suck.” " For some reason, that final part made my day, jajajaja, ya for Gaara and his Neji-uke XD
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you for made of Gaara such a creepy and cute seme and Neji his uke, really, I love you XD
person Teodora
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, it was hilarious! i laughed my ass of. and the note to Tsunade :))) lol. anyways nice story. :D nice smex scene by the way :D
person Makeila
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg, that story was great! [i <3 nejixgaara >.<]
the ending was hilarious!
"i can't believ you wrote that"
"shut up and suck"
fufufufufu
i'm a perv XP
oh, btw, i see no problem with using japanese-usuratonkachi, dobe, hokage [fire what now...?]
lol
^_^
person MissMayumi
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha that was a good yaoi! Gaara was soo clueless..haha condom?..haha it was funny..
person xD muha
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xDDDDDDDDDDD OMFG THIS WAS SO FUNNY! XDDD sorry but I can't stop laughing xD
person Hestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the percents for the weirdness factor! The note was pretty funny too. But poor Neji . . .