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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods. This had me laughing into my wrist because my current roommate is asleep. Wonderful, hilarious, oddly sexy and just...**claps**
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was beyond hilarious.
-died 435456 times-
Gawd, raw meat and sugar. That was so random. xD
I love this beyond all reason.
-died 435456 times-
Gawd, raw meat and sugar. That was so random. xD
I love this beyond all reason.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ommmmgg! *giggles* that was so cute and adorable...raw meat with sugar...poor neji!!!
but this was a really entertaining story!
but this was a really entertaining story!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really awesome. I loved the way you wrote Gaara, it was very IC. And his reactions, I was laughing quite a bit. I can't wait to read more of your fics, this one was great!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, this is my fave story on this site, for sure. I couldn't stop laughing. *good times*
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was hot i love neji and gaara they are hot. that stoy was sooooo sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waah! I absolutely loved this! It was so hilarious! It was also extremely well-written. Good use of words, images and descriptions. Grammar, mechanics and punctuation; all *perfect*.
*support group for the ‘I got my ass kicked by Naruto, and it changed my life profoundly’* - LOFL! Maybe Sasuke could ask to join too. It’d have to be a special membership, though, ‘cause his case is kinda different……
I loved the subtle bits of humour you interjected all over. * Tenten had dropped a few not-so-subtle hints about wanting him to come over and have sex*. Tee hee!
The sugar thing was a little weird at first….. then I realised it’s probably to keep himself awake and prevent Shukaku from laying waste to the world in one cataclysmic sweep. Yeah. :D
Characterisation was really good too. I love how you did Gaara, especially when he deadpanned that part about Neji having sex with Temari. And he was so frank and bland when he proposed sex…… sooooooo Gaara. Our little Hyuuga was good too. Sexually frustrated Neji and creepy (but cute and eager!) Gaara is so kawaii, and makes for excellent smut. At first I imagined Neji being the seme since he has more experience, but you’re right. Gaara can’t, and won’t be dominated by anyone.
I laughed myself silly when I read Gaara’s note to Tsunade. I heart this.
Excellent work here! Quality smut like this is hard to find. Thanks for sharing, and I hope you write more like it! :-)
~Sahara Storm
*support group for the ‘I got my ass kicked by Naruto, and it changed my life profoundly’* - LOFL! Maybe Sasuke could ask to join too. It’d have to be a special membership, though, ‘cause his case is kinda different……
I loved the subtle bits of humour you interjected all over. * Tenten had dropped a few not-so-subtle hints about wanting him to come over and have sex*. Tee hee!
The sugar thing was a little weird at first….. then I realised it’s probably to keep himself awake and prevent Shukaku from laying waste to the world in one cataclysmic sweep. Yeah. :D
Characterisation was really good too. I love how you did Gaara, especially when he deadpanned that part about Neji having sex with Temari. And he was so frank and bland when he proposed sex…… sooooooo Gaara. Our little Hyuuga was good too. Sexually frustrated Neji and creepy (but cute and eager!) Gaara is so kawaii, and makes for excellent smut. At first I imagined Neji being the seme since he has more experience, but you’re right. Gaara can’t, and won’t be dominated by anyone.
I laughed myself silly when I read Gaara’s note to Tsunade. I heart this.
Excellent work here! Quality smut like this is hard to find. Thanks for sharing, and I hope you write more like it! :-)
~Sahara Storm
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Neji was actually afraid Gaara might bite them off"
OK, this might not have been meant to be funny, but it completely cracked me up anyway. This was a really nice fic, very funny, and I hope you write more stories like this in the future. XD
OK, this might not have been meant to be funny, but it completely cracked me up anyway. This was a really nice fic, very funny, and I hope you write more stories like this in the future. XD
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! THAT WAS AWESOME!! lol, the ending rocked!, and a support group! tee hee!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! MOREMOREMOREMORE! You just made my day a whole lot brighter. I was getting sick and tired of all the smut and waff. I loved this, had me laughing for hours! btw, sand in Neji's pants, Gaara has that sandy eyeball jitsu right? *hint hint*