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This fic had me dying laughing from beginning to end. I'm surprised Sasuke didn't try to swipe some of Naruto's underwear the way he contemplated sniffing his pillow on his recon mission. It felt so real the fear Sasuke felt about being rejected that he was willing to break into Naruto's home and keep his feelings bottled up forever rather than put himself on the line. I love how both Sasuke and naruto are in character even when Sasuke is in a tight spot he does some very random but Sasuke like things like decide if he knocks out naruto then he can then erase the message and of course naruto hears it. He has to for them to get to that point but when naruto stopped Jim at the door for live ten seconds I feared the worse. I was like Sasuke turn yourself into a log in escape... But then he wouldn't have had the chance to get the life fucked out of him. And wow did he. I love how complicated these guys are because they can still trade insults while still trying to get into each others pants. Best moment was Saauke's all out brawl and I like how you don't dumb down Naruto. And you use kyuubi sense of smell to alert the blonde to danger. Oh my fucking god and Sasuke babbling how much he lives naruto on the answering machine and during sex was priceless.

Gosh, that was really awesome. And hilarious. XD You're a really good writer, I noticed. One of the best fanfiction writers (in my book). I hope you continue (with this pairing!) to write more stuff like this.
Great humor, love it. Keep it up! XD XD XD

“I hope you didn’t have any more plans for the day, Sasuke...or tomorrow, for that matter.”
Despite himself, Sasuke tangled his fingers in the blonde’s hair and leaned up to plant a long kiss on the man’s lips. “Why tomorrow?”
“Because I’m going to make sure that you can’t walk.”

=D yum! i finished chasing naruto last night (at 3am - i really shouldn't start reading fanfiction at midnight when i have work in the morning) BUT IT WAS WORTH IT! and this one was bloomin great!

a LOT of people have trouble writing naruto's character really well, but you can! congrats

HAH! That was really funny/hot. I epically loved the end.

*sigh* i am officially addicted to naruto, TEH ULTIMATE SEME! Nad what better seme makes sure his uke won't walk? its naruto, nruto-never know what hes gonna do next. Naruto Naaaruto. Gigity gigity lets have.... ahem. sorry. i just watched family guy U_U/

Be sure to write more NaruSasu! ^^

Ja ne!

Oh I loved this !!! Speacially the part where Sasuke confeses his love for Naruto in the dentist xD It's a cute way to say he loves him, I liked that a lot!

aaaw kawaii-ness (not to mention smexy-ness). and I am so happy I found your fics

*Mystic*

Hola,

I was just rereading the fics of my past, and I realized a few things about this fic that made me very happy, and one thing that kind of made me scratch my head. First off, I must thank you so very much for spelling viciously correctly. If I read about one more viscous grin, I will scream. The thought of melting faces in the middle of what would otherwise be a very intense scene gets real old real fast.

Anyways, I notice that I have not left a review for this story. FOR SHAME! Point is, I loved it as per usual. The only thing that really gave me pause was that Naruto never said how he felt about Sasuke. I realize that it is heavily implied that he loves him, but it could just as easily be read that Naruto was so happy at finally having someone say that they love him that he just screwed their brains out. While I am pretty sure that that is not the intended reading, it still is a little... unsettling. Not sure if that's the right word. Oh well, you get the idea I think.

I also realize that this is a one shot, but I would really love to see another installment. I mean, there are so many things you could do with this seed.

Anywho. I really loved it and I hope to read more of your stuff in the future.

All the best,

--Oranis--

P.S. I feel a sense of De Ja Vu while I write this... have I written it before or am I just losing my mind...?

Also, I notice that you have not written much lately... is there a reason for that? I mean to say, are you retiring from fiction, or is this just a break? Just curious.

bwahaha~
..loves this line about the bulls! -> "And not one wanted to go where I told it to without trying to stick a horn up my ass."
..loves ur fic!
^^

I love it! It's so kawaii! I guess you like a seme Naruto and a uke Sasuke, ne? ^.~

That was really good. You're amazing. Once I started, I just couldn't stop until i'd read the whole thing. I loved it so much! Great job! >.<