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person Ly
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH! XDDDDD
(much love)
person Amanda
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that I was able to find this fic again. I read it a while ago, and it still gives me the warm fuzzies that I experienced the first time around. Excellent writing style, and wonderfully hot smut. For the most part, the characterizations were dead on. There is only one thing that I bugged me about this fic. (Normally I would mention how the dentist and the gas were an obvious plot device, but that was intentional to get to the humour, and of course, the smut. Yay!) That would be Naruto's reaction to getting the "I love you" message. I felt like the only reason he was getting it on with Sasuke was because he had never "Heard those words before", not because he particularily fancied the boy wonder. It seemed to me like Naruto was grasping for the first sign of affection, and that if it had been anybody else confessing their love, his response would have been the same. He never says that he loves Sasuke(which is okay in my books, because it is my belief that the word is used too often), heck, he doesn't even say I like you. He just tortures Sasuke to get the knowledge out of him. Maybe I'm over-analysing everything. Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I hope that you contiue to grace the rest of us with your wonderful talents. Until next time!
Amanda
person Nasis
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very good fic! Keep up the good work!
person ladygizarme
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aahhhhhh i finally read this one, and can i just say....OMFTRF!! *nosebleeds* that was sooooo fulfilling... lil somethin to hold me over until it gets to this point in cn, nya ^__~ that was great soooooo gooooooooooooooood
person Tiina
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was one of the hottest thing I've red! xD and that sure i saying a lot.. I really liked the idea of Sasuke drugged and saying those things on the phone! I'd Really would like to see Sasuke when he's drugged! That conversation with the dentist, it was just sooo sweet :D I always knew Sasuke was a little romantic, but that Itachi made it even impossible to see ^^ And this was so looong, I really just loved this!
person Manda-Kun
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Squeeeeel!- That was a fangirl's gift from the gods! It was SOOOO cute! n_n And oh lordy, was it hot. That was the sexiest smut I've ever read. I mean really, Sasuke and Naruto XXXing is hot in it's self. But. I don't know, that was just WILD. I loved it! Thank you so much for the gift! I'm a rabid fan of yours. -Fangirl growl- Write more fanfics! <3
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. That was the hottest and sweetest fic I've read in a while.

Give me a moment I have to breathe.

And haha. Sasuke high of nitrous is *the* best. It was terribly invasive for him but it all worked out for the better.
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Purrs- I've been reading Chasing Naruto but have never noticed this part of it. x3 Or whatever you'd call it.

Mmm, the smex was Oh God Hot.

And Fucked Up Sasuke was even better. xDDD Of course you love Naruto.

He's such a cutie. x3
person viciouscallisto
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
3 cheers for narusasu!! i loved this fic. the image of sasuke-kun sneaking around in naruto's apartment trying to delete the message and then blaming naruto for letting people break into his home was just hilarious!! i absolutely loved the narusasu in this fic! poor sasuke-kun, though, he's gonna be hurting for days. good job with the fic!!
person blisblop
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.It is so light hearted yet so hot.A rare combination.Sasuke keeps confessing and Naruto keeps getting it up.Sigh.Ain't love grand.It was a shocker too.I felt so embaressed for Sasuke but really,you start beating Naruto up?Crazy boy.