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person Rachel Dracon
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was fuckin' awesome! I love the way you write Sasuke, all, 'I'm an Uchiha, those things just don't happen to me.' The drugs were really funny too, as was to fight with Sasuke desperatly trying to get to the answering machine. Naruto was well written as well, surprising Sasuke with his sneaking and such. All in all, great! ^.^
person Laz
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over*

Holy gods.... That was just... *coughs as mind reels from WHERE the idea came from* Thank goodness for kiddie cartoons? *coughs* Marevlous smut there, dearie--just simply.. wow... Aren't I glad I come into work at unholy hours of the morning and got to read this with no one staring over my shoulder? ^__^ You have a strong writing style and hell yeah, I could see it happening like this--*giggles* Cause you had them both FIGHTING, both of them being aggressive. You kept their personalities throughtout the fic, which I am eternally grateful for. You didn't make one into a simpering idiot. ^__^ Great job with this and I hope to see more from you.
person Kelly
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg.. that was hot...
person DeadUchiha
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...oh...oh my....WHEW! That was um...hahahaha! Again...HAHAHHAHAHA! I love it! Sweet Naru/Sasu goodness...makes me drool. Great job! Well, i'll just be cleaning up all this blood now... can't seem to stop ruinging my damned shirts...sheesh!

d(^-^)b
person Tashasaphi (forgot to login- doh)
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAHHH! BEST FIC EVAAA

Omg dentists are eevil. And i;ve seen that episode of hey arnold ^__^

This fic is great
you write well
and sasuke should stay uke forever and ever and ever!!

WUB YOU!

Tsx
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for amazing stamina! I haven't read too many PWPs that even mention Naruto's stamina. I was always wondering when I would~!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! Smutsmutsmutsmut!!! ^-^; lol I liked the intro with Sasuke's perfection shattered with a tiny cavity. Very nice. And I can see him getting totally wasted on gas like that, what a lark. heh. Those boys just get straight to business, don't they? An interesting piece of fluff.
person Ghonchi (not logged in)
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squee! sasuke uke! yay! now I can die happy ^^v

really awesome story! me lu~uv some good PWP after supper *twinkle, shine*.

You are a really awesome author! keep it up d^^b
person Germaine(2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! I love it! I have seen that episode of hey arnold too so I just laughed my way through half of it..^^
I'm more into Sasuke being the Seme but you might have changed my mind...^^..

A job well done!

hugs and love!
person macy
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaa!!! That was awesome. I was grinning madly when Sasuke's mood was in the clouds early in the fic. LOL. So funny!! I can just picture it. That was great. Gotta love the smut. And the end!!! Mwahahahaha...it was especially funny when Naruto said Sasuke can just lay there, LOL. XD