AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Engagement Trouble

by mayfaire

person anon
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
R u ever going to update this story or is it dead.
person whatevs
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well this was a really decent idea, although done to death but you kinda put me off with the Neji in kimono's thing. I know he's gorgeous and can pull off anything but its a bit much and the characters are only slightly in character which also makes the story suffer. You're sweet but need some guidance and I wish you the best in your other fics sorry I couldn't have enjoyed this one more I only made it to chapter 3 but I can't go on.
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I may think this because I'm grouchy right now, but Neji is acting like such a bitch! Shika just needs to curse him out right then and there. >.< At least that's what I think. But let Neji cool down a bit when you update it. That'd be nice. :)
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Imagine my horror after having ploughted through the entire story in one go... and you leave a cliffie like that! And threaten to abandon this fic! Its evil I tell you! EVIL!

Well, I know how it feels when the inspiration suddenly evaporates but with some good ol' reviews it did the trick for me. Either way, good job and hope you get your inspirationflow back on. A great story indeed! ^_^
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fiction, please update soon! (Heh, Neji in Kimono, how Kawaii)
person Killua
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon! I have been checking your story for over a week now almost everyday! 9nothing weird, I promise ^_^) i want to see who that mystery person is in the last chapter and .... uhm .... of course some lemon ... Hehee! -blushes-
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHH PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY! I JUST STUMBBLED ON TO THIS AND I AM SO GLAD I DID! I LOVED IT! nEJI IS JUST SEXY AS EVER AND SHIKA IS A STUD!!! I CAN'T UNTIL WE SEE WHO THE MYSTERY PERSON IS. WHO IS IT? SO PLEASE PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Thank you with all my heart!


~*Kill_me_kiss_me*~
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG YES.
^^

Very entertaining! More plz.
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OI...I LOVE IT! Please keep this going. Neji is such a friggin' drama queen, but I love him none the less.
person Sethos
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*screams in horror and has a heart attack*

*comes back moments later as a ghost* That Is Horrible Cliff Hanger!! I Must Know What Happens Next!!*flails*

Keep up the good work! ^^