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for Engagement Trouble

by mayfaire

person ayachan
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;_; this is wayyyy tooo cute.. please keep up the good work.. omg, they are so in love... lol, i was re-reading ch. 6 again, and when shikamaru lifted the kimono from neji's head it was like he was lifting a wedding veil off neji's head ;_; so beautiful ... symbolism.. they're sooo getting married and living together for the rest of their lives happily ever after :P
person Molecule Wrangler
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll probably try to kill you if you don't update this fic soon. ^_^. Hehe, jk jk, it's just so good and although at first I thought it was very OOC, now it doesn't feel that way and I really love it. So I hope you don't become like other authors who forget their fics and never finish them. This is a good one, so please finish it ^_^....or else I'll hunt you down to finish writing it! @_@...Hehe, jk kidding again. ^_^ So yes, good characterizations in the end, interesting plot line, just all around love it--including the rare, but wonderful pairing. Guess I'll have to wait a month for the next update, oh well. (In the meantime I'll just kill another author who hasn't been updating in awhile!) Sayonara ^_^
person Serenia
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you continued this! I love this story! *glee*
person Millia Rage
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! another chappie!! ahehehe...sorry...I didn't know you already updated this one...gomen..^__^

well...I love the humor in your fic...at least, it still makes SENSE about shika & neji's engagement right?

GUDLUCK!!!! ^_____________^
person Haze
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. *glomps you* You REALLY REALLY REALLY need to update soon. I'm dying for more. ^__^
person Nami
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! That's such a sweet story! Please continue! =D
person aoshi4misao
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story drew me in as soon as I saw the summary, and I read it out of sheer curiosity, but now I'm hooked. I don't know what it is about Neji/Shika, but I can't stay away from this pairing, and you are doing such a good job on the story. I love the character interaction. I patiently await the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! OMG, it's about time someone wrote a decent fic about Neji and Shikamaru!!! *hugs you and give you chocolates* I absolutely love this -- it's quite well done, very entertaining, and best of all the characters are actually realistic. ^^ A little bit of OOC-ness, maybe, but it's understandable and fits with the feel of the fic so over all Neji and Shika are still in character. Anywho~ keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ I can't wait to find out what happens!!!
person lstdpnthght
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah... more please!! This story is so cute ^^.. I'm quickly liking the pairing..
person Ecchi
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Skimpy what? I love this story! It's the cutest thing ever! I've never realy considerd this coupling before but it's damn sweet. That's an evil little cliffie you have there though. Please write more!