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for Engagement Trouble

by mayfaire

person akirei
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yaaay!! you made my day!! ahhhhh.... neji and shika almost kissed!! and just because of that, i declare that this is my current fave chapter!!
oh wow. school work? i can sympathize with you dude, i have three defenses this week and on top of that a thesis to work on!! my only escape is fics and engagement trouble are one of my faves.... ever!! your always doing a good job, and i really think you're great to juggle school work and writing fics! hehehe... anyway, i am a fan of your work, and always patiently awaits for your update!! (i think its worth the wait, really!!) ja ne.
person Brii
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so interresting, its very hard to come across a ShikaxNeji pairing ^^ theyre my fav. I love how youre writing this, though Neji seems a little more feminine than he should be its still very well written ^^ i hope to see an update on this soon, ill be whaiting XD
person Serenia
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter, but damnit - you're a tease! I wanna see them kiss already!
But no, you're doing it all very believably :)
person evil
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I shall make you smile, oh-wise one! *Smiles brightly while doing a good guy pose with a bottle of water in hand* Your story so far has amused me to greater ends, and I hope that it would continue! *Acts like... Well Lee or Gai* Ahh, the power of youth! *Strikes another pose* Will Shikamaru ever stop denying that he's attracted to Neji-san!? Will Neji ever admit that he's attracted to Shikamaru!? *Shakes head with a crestfallen look on face* Ahh, the wonders and problems of our youths today...

Meaning, UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDAEEETEEEEEEE!! *Waves flags and runs around you in circles*

UPDATEEEEE!!
person Serenia
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing! I do hope you write more. I'd like to see some actual romance in it... or at least some action! ;)
person Nissie
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy! I finally found a GOOD ShikaNeji fic! Aaah, I love you for taking time explaining the way their relationship evolves (but you better not quit this fic before they get together! *Tries to do the Uchiha Death Glare, but fails miserably*) Hehe, sorry for that... But yeah, please update! I don't really understand why you feel bad about your writing... It rocks! Yeah! It rocks my socks! Hahaha, so lame ^^;; Well, good job writing this pairing! I love it almost as much as I love Sasunaruness! Thanks ^^
person aoshi4misao
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very odd pairing, but it is also very interesting. I like this story. You are doing a good job on it; I can almost see the two of them fighting like a married couple over strange things. Shika is my favorite character, so I like fics that are about him. Keep up the good work.
person Kuuru
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it was total crap... It was nice.
person BloodAndChocolate
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, kawaii >.< will they kiss already?! *pout* i want some ACTION!!~Blood
person bara
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chpt. 5 OMG you have to update this soon, its so funny, and cute!