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for Engagement Trouble

by mayfaire

schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what's gonna happen, seems like neither of them are especially sure they want to continue this thing anymore, but it seems Neji starts to get feelings for Shikamaru. update soon again ^^


~Shika
person Shawver
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is fantastic! a little ooc, but still really funny and interesting (i've since learned to ignore OOC unless it's really done badly. you are doing very good, congrats ::grins:: ) please update! i wish to read mooooorrrreeee......
person Millia Rage
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey...I visited your website and posted a comment 'bout your on-going fanfics...

Anyways...what happened with the formatting?? Did you do that on purpose?

person akirei
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! another chap!! and to tell you the truth, this had been my fave chapter as of yet!! Totally loved ino, chouji and asuma's reaction!! hahha... if i were shika's teammate i'd be elated too!! ah... capturing the alluring hyuuga!! (you make neji here sound so alluring and sexy!! I love it!!) anyway, keep the chapters rolling and rest assured that i'd be reviewing them!! ja ne!!
person ayachan
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude!!! this should soooo be a shikaneji.. anyway, omg. "you look beautiful today" ^oo^ sooo sweet!!!
person Millia Rage
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooooohooooooo!!!!!!! Nice one!!! I hope Shikamaru wins..!!

I hope you'll make them kiss each other....*evil laugh* in front of Neji's uncle....(Neji's expression will be priceless!!)

I'll wait for the next chap!!! ^__^
person yukiko
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice little fics, I think it's quite funny so far. Don't stop writting it.
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seeing Neji in a kimono and stuff creeps me out a bit, but I like it. As I see it, Neji seems to be the uke, yay! Writing a too long review is killing my time right now, but the story still seems to turn out great, so make sure to update soon ^^

~Shika
person Corrie
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unusual pairing, but you make it work! I feel both of them are pretty much in character and I really like the way the story is going. Please please update soon - can't wait to read the next part! Excellent stuff, keep up the good work ^^
person akirei
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha!! hiashi's reaction was the best!! i thought he'll all be upset about neji having a 'male' lover!! never thought he'd be upset because it was hidden from him !! lol... ah!! i just love neji, he's a tease, isnt he? oh well, i hope you'll be updating soon or else i'm gonna die of excitement!! good job and keep it up!! i'll be waiting for the next installement!