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for Protect me, I'm yours

by Liliath

person darkangel
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEREEEEEEEEEEEE"""""""""SSSSSSSSSSS DAAAAAAA SMUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTT. *sexually frustrated* lol, luv ur story to bits.
person bhodi li
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oki..me patient...waiting for Sasunaru...actually I like the idea of a Kitten Naruto..kekekeke...sooooo cute!
person poofspoon
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think u misunderstood me my last review. i definitely DO NOT want chouji or Gai or any of them with naruto. Heres my opinion, naruto, when with males, should only be with those his age. All those his age are fine, except chouji and kankorou.....dont like them. For females, they're all nice, so do as you will with them.
person minjin00
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh another cliffhanger..wonder what other mischievious things naruto will do with neji. cant wait..love this story.
person hogo-chan
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! you are amazing! please update fast and a smutty chapter would be most appreciated! ^_^
person silverfox
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i really love ur writing style
i really really REALLY love slutty naruto
man i can't wait to see what happens next
i know the next chapter is going to be very
interesting in deed keep up the good work and update soon
person Gingitsune
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find it interesting that Naruto only listens to Itachi and his sensei. Hehe that'll make for an interesting scene after Naruto and Sasuke gets together ne? Yum! Naruto in a small yukuta? Hehe Hot! I find Naruto's sensei pretty refreshing. Hehhehe More soon onegai?
person blisblop
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so cool.I really love the way you have set this up.His sensi is top left,I love it.No pretense here just straight ahead epic smut.I bow to your advanced brain and raunchy great taste.I await your next installment with bated breath.Thank You.Naruto the slut is my hero,I kid you not.
person Twira
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it!! ^^ I loved the kakashi/Naruto kiss scene infront of his students, but oh pleeeeease write a Sasuke/Naruto scene... *puppy eyes*
person Anon
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just realized...this could be a nice drama triangle between sasuke and itachi. They fight about who gets naruto's ass.I like that. <3

much love to you.