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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that is so awesome! keep up the incredible work! I love your fic!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love this story so far!!! im looking forward to future chapters..update soon plz.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First : Stop bowing you will have problem with your back !!!!! LOL
Second : Hmm interesting reaction... What will our sluty Naruto imagine for our dark stickass bastard of Sasuke ? Will he tease him comparing the two brother so he can have a better sexual prestation ??
Third : Waouh!!!!! O__O Very hot Kisssss!! I think I'm nearly as disapointing as Kakashi that it had to end !!! snif... But it's quite promising for the rest !!!!
Continue please with a nake Naruto covered with ice-cream and a cherry on the top !!!
Second : Hmm interesting reaction... What will our sluty Naruto imagine for our dark stickass bastard of Sasuke ? Will he tease him comparing the two brother so he can have a better sexual prestation ??
Third : Waouh!!!!! O__O Very hot Kisssss!! I think I'm nearly as disapointing as Kakashi that it had to end !!! snif... But it's quite promising for the rest !!!!
Continue please with a nake Naruto covered with ice-cream and a cherry on the top !!!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Neji? You must update soon! Hehe, this fic is quite good ^_^ slutty Naruto is... tempting. Poor Kakashi haha. Well, keep it up, you rock!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm..nope..still some question marks in there....wanna see SASUNARU scenes **pout pout**
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty interesting, but there's a lot of errors.. "Board shoulders" is the one that stuck out the most to me and then there's this problem with every ' "" and , becoming question marks instead.
Other than that, it seems to be well written, but can you check your chapters after you publish them for any problems like this because it makes it extremely difficult to read.
--Dhampir
Other than that, it seems to be well written, but can you check your chapters after you publish them for any problems like this because it makes it extremely difficult to read.
--Dhampir
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww thats so nice and cute and funny XD. please update soon ;_; please~~
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO. Talk about an introduction. lol
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow naruto moves fucking fast for just meeting some one
any way great chapter. there were still a couple ? but not that many
keep up the good work. can't wait to see what happens next.
any way great chapter. there were still a couple ? but not that many
keep up the good work. can't wait to see what happens next.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting Naruto.I wanna see him with Orochimaru for a one off,A hot Oro not the usual dumb bunny knee jerk write up he gets,come on people,that tougue should be a national,international treasure!I wish we got more detail with Itachi but Sasuke is around so I have hope.I can't wait to see what outrage you come up with next.You go!Sluts Rule!!!