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for Protect me, I'm yours

by Liliath

person Anon
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! This is hilarious!!!! When Naruto pounced on Kakashi I just had to read over again. And laugh. This is a very refreshing and much- needed original fic; you`re a genius. i`ve never bben much into KakaNaru fics, but I just ma after having a such a delicious taste. Thank you.
Now this is not a painting of mine, but I saw it today and it was the first thing I thought of after reading your fic; this must be how Kakashi felt like

http://www.deviantart.com/view/7411848/

Anyway; pleasepleaseplease update soon!!
*sits glued to the chair*
person Anon
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, and btw, there are some errors, but they really aren`t that annoying/noticeable. The language, style and writing seems to me rather excellent compared to (tto many) other fics sharing this particular space, and anyways the story is too good to let oneself be bothered by such petty details.
person Stormraven
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Let's hear it for Slutty Naruto!!! Hot, steamy, mmmm mmmm finger-lickin' good...........more please?
person Kitty ^^
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smirk* heehee nice love your story "chibi" ^^ I didn't know you had an account on here oh well ^_^ Your story is really good ;3 Me loves it ^^ Anyway I'll be on Aim Tomorrow, so I'll talk to ya tomorrow ^^ nighty night chibi *glomp**huggles*

*kissys*
person Yum
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay okay I review you don't have to bow nor beg, it's quite of bizarre !!!
Interesant story Will we know how Naruto was 'found' by his 'sensei' ? And how he meet that 'very' dangerous missing nin ?
I can't wait to read his reaction when he will meet Sasuke, He will have a shock !!
Please continue !!! ^^
person poofspoon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
favorite?make almost all of them do him! In my opinion, the ones i DONT like are naruto and: Kakashi, Asuma, Gai, Lee, Chouji, Shikamaru. and, of course, the 3rd. Anyone else is great for me!
person bhodi li
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SASUNARU of course! I think it would make a nice little triange between Sasuke and Itachi..whoohooo. The grammar needs a lot of work but it's pretty good for a non-native speaker. Is it supposed to be question marks instead of apostrophes? I like the idea of a slutty Naruto..kekeke..he's hot.
person wee
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
itz a nice storii but y iz there so many ? marks? itz kinda confusin @_@
person Momochi Zabuza
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! This looks verry good!

KAKAxNARU please? KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU KAKAxNARU ! ! ! ! ! !

I <3 that pairing!

Update soon onegai!

You've done a great job for this first chapter!

[I'm known also known as 'Momochi Zabuza' on FF.net... check up on me!]

person silverfox
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL YES A SLUTTY NARUTO YES this is a great fic but y so many ? makes me confused oh well
UPDATE THIS FIC DAMMIT can't wait to see what happens next oh and make all of them do naruto except
sakura, gai, and choji k other than them i'm kool with it