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for Protect me, I'm yours

by Liliath

person Tismine
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, PLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEE update! this is so good, and I love the concept...woot! Lots of smut with an acyual plot! and the slutty Naruto....*fans self*
person blisblop
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeeeee!That was fun.I TA CHI is divine yas,I agree Naruto you lucky little bugger.
person Eldalote
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. I really like your fic. like you said, some minor grammar-mistakes, but nothing I can't live with ^^ definitely a NICE plot *hehehe* and I'll be reading this next chapter (is there even a next chapter? I ahven't checked yet ^^) anyways, this is very nice and I look forward to reading the next chapter. ^^ XD

Keep up the good work! X3

*HUGGLES*
person Eldalote
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*lol*.. wonderful chapter! :D kaka/naru ftw! ^^v and well, this was just plain amusing. keep it up! *goes off to read next chapter*
person Eldalote
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(for chapter 4) yay! :D trust me, you don't have to be embarrased, that was definitely a well written lemon-scene! XD soo cute! Neji/Naru ftw. ^^ :D
person amy
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NANIIIIIII??????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY STOP THERE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! ITS TOO GOOD!!!
TT-TT... but now im awfully curious....who IS naru-chan gonne end up with... O.o too bad kakashi and naruto couldn't get it on...i was so hoping for that too...but now with gaara in the picture, i cant wait until you update your next chapter!!! please do so soon!!!!
person kaecy
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yey! an update! been waiting for this in a veeery long time! so glad you updated!
person claire
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You did well!!!!! Good JOB!
person Shiro-Sama
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! U FINNALLY UPDATED!!! THANK GOD!!! I love this fic thx for updating i was thinking u were dead! Once again i hope u update soon! I cant wait for ITACHI Too come! YAY! Gaara arrived YAY!!! Time for some GaaNaru! ITACHI! O where art thou ITACHI!! Even though this chapter was Uber Long it went by fast! Hope u can make more chapters like these! Update soon ne? Ja Ne! =^-^=
person Elric Maxwell
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, a slutty Naruto...just the thing to cool one's perverseness. X3 I think I like this side of him, and I can't wait 'til Itachi comes back! Shit's gonna hit the fan I just know it! Update soon, I can't wait to see if he's gonna screw Gaara! EM