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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Itachi is coming??! Yes! I would definitely love to see more ItachiNaruto action! Yes! Well, it'll be interesting as to how this story is going to pan out with all these people after Naruto. More? *grins*
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So cool please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And can Gaara and Naruto REALLY fall ijn love please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love Gaara and I think a one night stand would hurt him to much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“You’re confused, I presume. Not unexpected,” she scoffed, clearly mocking Tsunade, “so let’s go straight to the point optional commathen. Itachi is here,”
NE! NE! Lil-chan!!! You missed removing a couple of beta notes!! that part is where the actual notes are...the "optional comma" should just be an actual comma (or none at all) and the "so" part is still in bold!! XPPPPPPPP But yeah. DANG IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED! SHEESH I THOUGHT I WOULD DIE OF WAITING!!! Hee hee...yeah yeah, i know it's all my fault...XP But at least i got it done for you!!! And OSM made sure i didn't fuck anything up too badly so NYAH! XD
And it was a good chapter!! LOL i like the stuff with Tsunade!! Hee! Very funny! and the way you write Gaara is good! And that section was also quite funny! hee hee...they got lost...XP So now i wanna see some Itachi! Itachi and Naruto (slut chan) and Sasuke! Get! them! together! The shit must hit the fan! MAKE THE SHIT HIT THE FAN! PLEASE!!! Oh and don't forget to throw in a little Jealous Neji and a splash of horny Gaara and stir! Then you have the makings of of a 'fucked up beyond recognition' cocktail! *giggle* Oh and don't forget to describe Gaara's situation more thoroughly! There are many intriguing questions that must be answered!! Gyaaaah! and of course we must learn more about Shimori! You should try some graphic violence or vilent sex with her and someone! With like, Kakashi or something! She has to fuck somebody up royally, right?! *hopes for much blood* blah...I'm on medication right now so I'm gonna stop typing before i pass out...
NE! NE! Lil-chan!!! You missed removing a couple of beta notes!! that part is where the actual notes are...the "optional comma" should just be an actual comma (or none at all) and the "so" part is still in bold!! XPPPPPPPP But yeah. DANG IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED! SHEESH I THOUGHT I WOULD DIE OF WAITING!!! Hee hee...yeah yeah, i know it's all my fault...XP But at least i got it done for you!!! And OSM made sure i didn't fuck anything up too badly so NYAH! XD
And it was a good chapter!! LOL i like the stuff with Tsunade!! Hee! Very funny! and the way you write Gaara is good! And that section was also quite funny! hee hee...they got lost...XP So now i wanna see some Itachi! Itachi and Naruto (slut chan) and Sasuke! Get! them! together! The shit must hit the fan! MAKE THE SHIT HIT THE FAN! PLEASE!!! Oh and don't forget to throw in a little Jealous Neji and a splash of horny Gaara and stir! Then you have the makings of of a 'fucked up beyond recognition' cocktail! *giggle* Oh and don't forget to describe Gaara's situation more thoroughly! There are many intriguing questions that must be answered!! Gyaaaah! and of course we must learn more about Shimori! You should try some graphic violence or vilent sex with her and someone! With like, Kakashi or something! She has to fuck somebody up royally, right?! *hopes for much blood* blah...I'm on medication right now so I'm gonna stop typing before i pass out...
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just finished reading this and I was all like 'You made Naruto a whore!' and 'I love you! You're so fun!' and 'GAAAAAAAAAAAARAAAAAA' and ' I love Gaara' and 'I wonder when I'll get my update'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And on that note PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Want more of this fic!!!!!!!!! this is good!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh... slutty Naruto. SMEXEH!!! update soon ne?
~Rai
~Rai
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want to know what happens next! Please, please continue this story *begs on hands and knees*
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This story is really good- I stumbled upon it and read the whole thing in one sitting. I'd love to read more !!
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This story is really good- I stumbled upon it and read the whole thing in one sitting. I'd love to read more !!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Attacks and snuggles) love ya!!!!!!!! good plot, very good plot, I'm sick and tired of nice and good Naruto, I like evil naruto better with evil Itachi!!!! muhahahah good plot and details waiting for more. I been reading this over and over again and finally decide to make a review, bad make me, bad
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, you updated! How could I have miss the two new chapters?! Yummy as ever, do continue!