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(cries river of tears) the horror of a cliffhanger, whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I wonder what itachi would do if he caught Naurto screwing Kakashi? or even gaara? my my waiting for more of this delicious tale!

omgsh.. that was good! i love slutty naruto! ^^ i want to see lotz and lotz of jealousy.. ^^ update soon! *could ya by any chance email me when you update?*

I'm done with all 6 chapters...n although i don't know what SMUT is...i believe all 6 make up the word......very arousing n horny, i'll give u that!!....keep it up!....gd descriptive skills..regardless facial expressions or sex scenes.....btw, i don't fancy KakaNaru.....the rest are fine..... update soon!

ITANARU4EVER !!!!! Oki, this long awaiting chapter was awesome !!! Hope the next one will be as good as this one and mybe with more 'action' ;D !!
Continue, your story is AWESOME !! (I'll never say it enough !!!:p

I will be holding you to your quick update (few weeks) soon promise *holds Itachi plushie at knife point* Hmm..........one super hot kiss between Naruto and Sasuke. Yummy. Can't wait til Itachi gets on the scene. Where's Iruka?! *holding Iruka plushie* OOOooOoo you introduced Gaaru and the Sand siblings......hmm.....wonder if they will get intoxicated by Naruto too? Esp Gaaru. Hmm.........yeah Itachi and Naruto is HOT!!! *fans myselfs* You tease! What is Naruto doing on Kakashi's bed? Will they get any action? Argh! More? *grins*

arggg this is such a hot story! I've read it all in one go!
Please add more naruxkakashi !!!!!! and what about narutoxiruka or/and narutoxgenma?! pretty please ^^

Hey!

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time... -_-, a lot of bad stuff going down over here and so I've had no time to write, read or review until now. I saw you updated and so now I just read the other five chapters! I still see some small grammatical problems every now and then, but your writing had definitely improved and I'm loving it's development. I love Sasu/Naru, but I gotta say, I think I love Ita/Naru even more (started writing Ita/Naru but had to stop).

Anyway, I can't wait until the next chapter! I hope Itachi will be there this time <--Loves Itachi if you can't tell.

--Dhampir

Ow-miw-gawd (can't speak properly due a hand on her bleeding nose) So many ItachiNaruto goodie. I WUFF YOU *clings to her comp and never lets go* The lemon is HAWT!
Not too mention slutty Naruto!Please make the end ItaNaru though othersNaru will be much appreciated. Just not Jiraiyanaru or SarutobiNaru *cringe*

May

OMfG I LOVE THIS STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!anyway when I readed the summary I thinked whoah that is really a sex story or something like that -_________-; but then I started to read it and it was sooooo good my friend called me crazy ( cus he did only read the summary and nothing else )and all heh but write the next chapie please um wonder what ita-chan will do whit sasu-chan when he figures out XD

YAH!! THAT WAS GREAT! My gosh.. could you email me when you update? Since I won't know otherwise?

My Email: Kaieneyo@yahoo.com

This story is REEEEAAAALLLLYYYYYY good so far!! Btw, will we be getting more ItachixNaruto Action?
Maybe a bit of GarraxNaruto action as well? Its seems pretty obvious that there'll be SOME KaNa
action, but.... I LOVE ITACHIXNARUTO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Can Naruto REMAIN in love with Itachi PLEASE?! Geez.... I'll die if this turns into something else...
You can find PURE ItachixNaruto fics that easily and even HARDER to find a fic that is like
Naruto x Everyone and have him end up with Itachi....

Even those SasuNaruIta ones... hardly ANY of them END with Itachi and Naruto together you know?

I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I REALLY hope this'll be ItachixNaruto!!!!!!!!!