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for Protect me, I'm yours

by Liliath

person blisblop
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Itachi is coming ,gaara is coming.I am so suprised to see no birthday stories for Sasuke.Sighs.I have to give a lame reveiw cause I am sick and it is 102 here.Gak.Naruto and I both need relief.
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God i love this story it rocks . . . . a perfect score rating should be 10!!! i hope you add Gaara and Naruto hehehe and maybe some Sasuke and Naruto lemon . . . .god oh maybe all of them . . . .jezz kool story i just hope you add gaara to the group *evil thoughts* hehehehe . . .. i love your story i hope you update very soon.
person Horizont
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow, this is so... perfect! Naruto is a bit to over powerful for my taste, but that is fine with me if he's that slutty and sleeps around so much! Now can I please have that KakaNaru...? *can't wait*
I love Sasuke like this, he's... well, just Sasuke I guess, but I love him anyway. Can there be a ItaSasu in the future? *puppy dog eyes*

You're a great author!
~Horizont
person sdfasdf
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please write more! its soooo hot. i would definatley like to see more kakashi and naruto pairings, just because i'm sick and like to see hot older men screw submissive horny boys. YUM!! so please...if you want to get a lot of reviews and make a fan girl happy...please please PLEASE put kakashi and naruto pairings through out the story. kakashis just so sexy and for him to take a 14 year old naruto would be sooooo hot! but anyways...besides that..its really good and smutty. i give slutty naruto two thumbs way up!
person mitsune
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IYAAAHHH!!!! how can you do that?! stop when it was the good part i hope itachi catches naruto-chan with sasuke, boy that would be a party ^_^. please update soon, my nose almost bled a while ago sheesh! how troublesome...
person Yum
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hollidays, Hollidays !!!! Yeah I love hollidays !!!
I like this chapter maybe a little less than the other....(not enough action !!! :p)
Will Kakashi 'fuck' Naru-chan before Itachi comes ? hmmm, I can't wait !!!
Now did Shimouri kill her little brother ? I don't understand the flashback very well...
Anyway, I just hope to read you soon !!! :D
person vampchic
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Gaara showed! Me love Gaara! Cant wait for some GaaNaru action! And I cant wait for the next chapter. Those little tibits got my attention! Update soon kay? Cant wait to read more!
person Erika
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!! that was a GREAT chapter:D...LOL...Poor Sasuke probably didn't see that one coming...MWA HAHAHA!!! THANKS:D
person angel of darkness
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heehee great chapter ^_^ cant wait till gaara gets there to see what happens ^_^ cant wait for more ja ne
person DEADUCHIHA!
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL....Sigh...damn MT!!! AND DAMN IT YOU TOO!!! i know it's going to be a while before you update...cries....Sigh...
This Chappy was very nice though! MMMmmmm i just love it when Naru and Sasu make out...*whips out tissue*
LOL! And Naru is such a hornball! Sheesh! He's got to be THE horniest Naruto i've ever seen!
You can send him to MY place you know! I will take good care of him for you!...Damn it...why does he have to be gay?
Oh well, moving on then...LOOK I'm over it alraedy! LOL
Well, shit....I guess I'll just leave you with a *GIANT FUCKING GLOMP OF DEATH! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!*
OH! sorry! I don't know what came over me just now...O.O
LATER THEN YOU EVIL GODDESS OF EVIL SLUT NARU-CHAN!
d(^-^)b

damn it...hurry up with that next chappy! Grrrr...