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for Protect me, I'm yours

by Liliath

person Leasan
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO hilarious, so smutty, so sexy, OH GOD!!!
Your fic is just great, just superbly gripping and I simply ADORE it!!
Slutty Naruto is absolutely gorgious!!!
And what shall he do with our sweet, innocent Sasuke?...
I hope that many, many delicious things! XD
Oh, and Gai sensei and Lee? XD sooooo funnny, og dear GOD, so f..ing hilarious!!
That pary from you - hahahahahah XD HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Yeah baby, just like bunnies ;D
MORE, MORE!!
And ASAP!!!!
person Sooky_babi
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chu chu chu*

You're doing a wonderful job for not being from an english background! I thought misread and thought said u were from souvalaki lol*coughs* *sweat drops Any how keep it up =)
person Shingo the Pest
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow!! ^____^ I love your Naruto! He's the uke-honeybaby that he should be. I send you my love! <3
person Yum
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo !! long time not read !!! ^^ Been busy with exam... I've 5 next week ... :(
Anyway very good three chapters !!! Want more !! Want a Ita/Naru !! Not just a flashback !! I would like it with a jealous 'Tachi-chan !!! Sexualy torturing Naru-chan for his little encounter with Sasu-chan... Pleassssssssssssse !!! *puppy eyes* please with a nake Kakashi cover with sweet (Yummy)
Ugh by the way 'warui na' doesn't mean 'I'm sorry', It means : 'it's bad !'. If you want to say sorry use Gomen (less poli), Gomennasai (more poli) or sumimasen (more poli), sumanai (less poli)
Just hope to read you soon !!
PS : Sorry for being so demanding but I absolutly LOVE this story !!! ANd the pairing Ita/Naru !!!! I have never enough of it !!! ^^
person darkangel
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dazed* i dunno wat to say............

i'll just go.......and.....take......a.....very.very.cold.shower..........
or maybe just read da bit where lee "fucks" naruto................................*shivers*
person Erika
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1st WOW!!! that was GREAT LOVED that...just WOW!!! and second what do you mean that Kakashi is going to have a run in w/Naurto's sensei...and they way you said it was kinda ominous....this is going to be all kinds of interesting can't wait..THANKS:D
person Gingitsune
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe you have no idea how happy I am to see a new chapter from you. Hot! Hot! Hot!!!! Heheh love the Itachi X naruto flashback. Hehe and you left it at a mini cliff hanger!!! Hahah I wonder if Naruto will get his kiss. I burst out laughing when I read that Lee, Naruto and Gai has a threesome and lived happily ever after. I know that both Lee and Gai are nice guys, but the thought of them with Naruto just makes me shudder in fear. Lol. That was Neji's first time?? Wow~ hehe we just have to see how Neji would try to win Naruto over. Where's Iruka??? Heheh Kaka X Naru is hot as well. Hahah Gaa X Naru too. I know what you mean. So many combinations, so little time. Heheh Am looking forward to your next chapter!
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That was very nice indeed! MT did a good job! And YAY! Naru/Sasu-ness Woot! I just LUVS it! You did a realy good job with the Naru/Lee fight scene and i thought the Gai interation stuff was hilarious! Neji, as always, was great! and Itachi....heh...what can i say about him?? Ha! YUMNESS!!!!! Damnit now I'm all mad because i want the next chapter!!! Grrr....Anyway...Graet job! Woot! Looking forward to your next update! Sheesh! So hurry it up already!!!!
d(^-^)b
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammit it all!!! I can not spell to save my life!!!! anyway i meant "INTERACTION" in that last review...i really don't see whats so hard about spelling that word...but can't seem to EVER spell it right!!! any BLAAA!!!! *runs away to to do HomeWork...starts crying* Laters! d(^-^)b
person blisblop
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eleven times with itachi,I feel dizzy,24 hours of tease,thats evil.You said he talked to Itachi like he was a retarted boy...like he was a tart then got away from it but couldn't resist and now he is re tart ed.Silly,sorry.Sasuke next yeah!I like that Naruto is very advanced in his training...makes one wonder what else he can do with his advanced powers.Could he out fuck Orochimaru?(it is your fault I am thinking of him and his tounge,you mentioned the curse seal)Another wonderfully cocky chapter!Smirk.