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well, i stick with what i said earlier about kakashi and naruto, but im pretty sure you wont budge on that, so ill just skip it when u write that chapter. anyhow, any female pairings in this fic? or naruto as seme? either would be nice, but i guess not necessary.....anyhow, keep updating.

Mmm, talk about yummy! that was hot!! ahh, got to read more of this. you had better update soon. more please!!

Hot! Hot! Hot! Is it just me or is it getting hot in here? Lol Hmm.......love your writing. However, the errors that are present just distracts the reader from your lovely writing. Maybe you can try getting a beta reader? *grins* Heheh Naruto did get what he wants ne? Lol. Jealous!Neji is just so adorable! *glomps* You really make me wonder as to what had happened between Naruto and Itachi for Naruto to have such loyalty to Itachi. Hmm.........heheh Naruto's sensei is going to get evil? As long as she doesn't torture Naruto. *sticks out tongue* Flashback with Itachi? Yes please! *puppy eyes* This is not going to be a SasuNaru? Hmm...........who then? Hehe I still think that KakaNaru would be really hot as well *fan herself* More onegai?

OK that's interesting...very very INTERESTING...Hmmm...wonder how the folks in Konoha are going to react to this Naruto...that was a great beginning

Just read your author's notes and realised that your native language is not English. Good job! You did such a good job that I didn't quite realise that *grins* Gambatte ne!

you just HAVE to make a scene w/Kakashi and Naruto that was AWESOME...hehehe....there is just not enough Kaka/Naru out there unfortunately that was GREAT:D

THIS IS AMAZING!!!!! I can't wait for you to update!

does Naruto fall for anyone?

Yeah, Neji/Naruto all the way!!! I hope Neji gets him in the end, there are very few fics with Neji actually winning Naruto in the end. You did a really good job on your first lemon, you would never know!

SWEET!~!! Neji/Naru can't wait to read it...but I wonder are you going to have anything done between Kakashi and Naruto?? Oh well that was GREAT:D

for english not being your first language, you are doing extreamly well. I really like your story. cant wait for all the wonderfull smut to come! please update soon. I sooooo want to read more!