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for caught in a cage of sand

by AprilC

person frizzy197
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really really good right more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Keaton
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job. Very descriptive, very nice. I can see it in my mind, heh. Keep up the great work!
person Keaton
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning to the story, caught my attention immediately. n.n <3
person Some Psycho Pyro
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's oK! I can wait, * goes and drags the fridge all the way up to the computer* see, now I only have to leave to use the restroom ^^
person dakara
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok 1 this story sounds good 2 WHY THE FUCK DID YOU MADE GAARA FUCK NARU-CHAN HUH IT'S SASUKES JOB (MWAAA HA AHAAA HAAAAAA and you know naru-chan is sasukes bed slave so dah hahahahahah but come on write a lemon WHIT SASUKE AND NARUTO NOT GAARA AND NARUTO GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR ok
person mizu megami
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that sux T.T i was hopeing(sp?) to find another chapter T.T oh well i really like this fic :D plz update as soon as possible. as for your family not likeing anime that REALLY sux :( cant wait for the new chappie ja ne :D
person alisha
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOHOO!!!!!! Heh just noticed that on Fanfiction.net you had a link to AFF which allows happy goodnesss lemons!! WOOTT!!! Hope you made the 100 review thingie you were talking about. I pity tose on fanfiction.net who don't come here for the lemony goodness. :D:D:D:D

WOOT!!! I reviewd ya before on fanfiction, but enjoy a happy review here. Poor Naruto getting his happy moment interupted by Kyuubi(nice one)..lol made me laugh. Happy to have a lemon, and wouldn't mind if the next chapter is all plot with Sasuke(Sasuke...your too concieded and too much of a bastard to ever get Naruto :P), heh go GAARA! Oh the hottness! Heh your lemon scene was nice.....*drooooooool*....anyway yep I'll review in in a few weekd when you update again and I am sorry your family doesn't like anime/happy-go-lucky-gayness(well they propably like the hot-driping-steamy-gayness less o_0). Can't wait ofr you to get back!

~alisha
person vesselofvoices
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want naruto to stay with gaara (willingly if possible!) Gaara so seldom gets to be loved
person Emily Saeke
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sand collar? I like the sond of that!! Keep it coming please!!
person lost complex
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry I didn't vote, it's just that I rather like to read the outcome the author chooses, if not I drive myself crazy thinking that the ending I like is not the real ending, and that the other or alternative ending is the real ending because the author fancies it over the one I like, and so I get all riled....weird I know. Can't wait for an update, congratulations, hope you write more stories, GaaraNaruto ones.