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You confuse me a bit. First it sounds like Naruto was the most precious thing for Gaara and now he´s just a toy??? Personally I don´t like when People refer to other humans as toys. But that´s just me. Also it would be nice if this will be a Gaanaru fic. There aren´t many of them. -_- And I also don´t see why Sasuke should deserve him. Please update soon, ok? Bye, bye. ^_~

Well, it's good so far. try spacing out the paragraphs and you might want to try and add more detail to make each action flow more easily.

great chapter man that was interesting keep up the good work

I like this fic...but you'll get more reviewers if you stop with the long paragraphs. Our eyes are bad enough as it is, we don't need you to make it worse!! UPDATE SOON!!

Mmm, I like. Can't wait to find out what Naruto's reaction will be to find that Gaara has taken him away. And what will Sasuke do?? Hope you update soon. I really want to read more. Also, you might want to concider getting a beta, the last two chapters where kind of hard to read and and you had some grammer and spelling errors. Other then that, I like!

poor Naruto. The village really does treat him like shit. I wonder what Sasuke's reaction will be when he learns that Naruto was taken. And Naruto's reaction as well when he wakes up to find himself in Gaara's possession. Hope there will be plenty on GaaNaru action coming up! Mmmm, me love Gaara! Update soon!

Cause this was a mean cliff hanger. Hope this is updated soon =^.^=

I would like to be Gaara's toy......except.......sand gets EVERYWHERE, y'know what I mean?
Heheh......Sasuke's not gonna be too happy about this, no he won't!
Keep up the good work!
Love ya!
Kai

Bwahahahah! Sasuke at the end...that was fucking funny!!! Knock him out...BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
"Then the door opened to show Ino with a spare key. Where had she gotten that? He only had one key to the house!
Then he remembered one day he had lost his key and Ino had 'found it' and
given it back, but for that night he had to stay with Naruto." That was funny! Ino is such a coniving bitch...i hate her!

Damn! Gaara is a complete pychopath in this! YAY! I love it! And the 3 days cut to 6 hours...hahahaha!

The only thing that bothered me was the format, or whatever...The paragraphs were separated wrong...it was a little distracting while reading...Not terrible, just a little annoying...It's an easy fix though. *wink* I hate doing that shit too...it's a pain in the ass fixing. Heh. Can't wait to see what cutie Gaara has in store for Naruto! And SASUKE! WEEEEE! Let me know when you update! you know where to find me!
Later then sweetie!
DeadUchiha
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OMG!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU SAID THANKS!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER LOVEY!!!! XOXOY(Y=GLOMP ^^)XOYXOYXOYXOY
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LOVE YA!!!
Kai