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Hey! Look at this! A very interesting angle! The story is begining to take shape! I wonder what Gaara has in store for Sweet little Naruto? MWAHahahaha! Oh sorry...hee hee...I'm a bit sleepy right now...Long nights in front of a computer will do that...bllaaa.... *big ass bubble pops* Oh! Hey! Yeah! So back to it then! Noticed a couple of spelling errors, but can't go back and look at them to see what they were so i'll just continue on like i said nothing prior to this sentance that i'm running on even as i sit here and type this. AHHH! OH! Chapter three is looking good! I wanna see where this is headed...Let me know when chapter 3 is posted so i can check the whole thing out...you left it at a radical midsentance cliff hanger in your email! Grrr!!! Sheesh...I need to go to sleep now... Until later then.
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good chapter
can't wait to see what happens when
gaara gets there keep up the good work

nice! Sasuke sure will be mad when Gaara appears, wont he...
and i wonder what Naruto will do when he learns both boys are after his heart.
continue writing, me like it. want to read more!

WHHEE!!!! YAY!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!
Kai

*cough*gaaranarusasu*cought*

no it's not that bad so far, can't wait to see Gaara when he'll get that the village hate naruto, and not the inverse like he thought.

and sasuke .... loll

It seems like it's off to a really great start. Still, you might want to do something about the formating. 6 words for each line is a little... distracting. It looks like a poem almost. And the exclamations are a little over the top too. But other than that this sounds like the start of a really good fic. Can't wait to read more!