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for caught in a cage of sand

by AprilC

person BALH
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yAY!!! THROWS CONFETTI! GO SASUKE!!!! ANY WAY HERE'S A REVIEW FOR YOUR BET THING!!!
person Kativa-chan
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. Just space out the paragraphs a bit, because it's a hard to read.
person riverspirte77
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get the 100 reviews, I'll review the next 3 chapters to help! I like you story, I love the Gaara/Naruto pairing, though I think you went overboard on the villiger's treatment of Naruto. In the Anime they don't treat him as the most loved person in the world, but they don't try to kill him. There are also villigers that treat him pretty good.
person Leasan
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell was that???
Did something misterious happen to my internet browser (but somehow I don't think so), or that last chapter really was THAT short and...unnerving?...
Anyway, I like the story so far, so update ( I mean really! not some scrap of a text, please) ASAP.
Gaara in love, passionate and caring, and taking revange - yummy!!! Beat them into pulp and than make some sweet loving to Naruto!
That would make my day, yeah...
person Kusachu
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. lol! yay! things are getting fucking wacky! LOL! this very entertaining indeed! Poor kankuro and temari...watching as Naruto is molested!...LOL...and Sasuke...oh geez...don't get me started...he's a STALKER!!! wee! OH good grief! Damn...i can't wait to see what random weirdness you come up with next! YAY! *Glomp* d(^-^)b
person MoonlightShadow
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O omg!! don't stop!! I want to know what happend between Gaara and Naruto *grins* its suck a good story!!!
person MoonlightShadow
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o...wow..I can't spell >.
person vampchic
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. Cant wait for the next chapter. Dont wait to long on that kay? And poor Sasuke, why is he being guarded? Why wont Tsunade let him go after Naruto? Is Tsudnade going to let Naruto stay in the Sand believing that he would be better there for awhile seeing as Gaara saved him? And I wonder how Naruto will react when he finds himself in the Sand. And with Gaara. That little tibit at the end wasn't enough to answer that question. Which is why they are called tibits!^^ Update soon! Want to read more girl!!
person Green Eyes
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A hundred reviews huh? Hope you win that bet.
That was kind of funny, having Gaara fondle Naruto like that in front of his siblings. No shy bone in his body huh? Cant wait to see just what he has planned for Naruto.^^ And why would Sasuke have to drug Naruto though? Was he really that afraid that Naruto would reject him?
Anyway, hope that you update soon. Cant wait to read the yummy goodness that you promised!
person Emily Seake
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Moremore, I want MOREMOREMORE!!!!! Very lovely story...keep it up please!^^