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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chappie. That part where Sasuke thinks of the ways he could improve Naruto's living remind me of this Yu gi oh! fic where Bakura lives with Seth and when he meets up with Marik and sees all the things Bakura gets from Seth he says something like 'So you're riding the wave of luxury by just letting him ride you a few times',
Now the negotiations to get NAruto back would begin, wonder how the diplomats will get the sand to deliver Naruto when he's the only thing keeping Gaara remotedly happy, so in one hand we have the imnsoniac demon possesed redhead enjoying his time with his new toy and far from the kazekage office, or we could have the same inmsoniac boy sexually frustated running free through all suna.. dun dun dun...
Now the negotiations to get NAruto back would begin, wonder how the diplomats will get the sand to deliver Naruto when he's the only thing keeping Gaara remotedly happy, so in one hand we have the imnsoniac demon possesed redhead enjoying his time with his new toy and far from the kazekage office, or we could have the same inmsoniac boy sexually frustated running free through all suna.. dun dun dun...
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the lomon yay! =^___^=
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
‘I need to pick up something that this
village has been holding for me for the last 13 years and now I'm here to
collect it. " <---------Gigglies!!! YAY!
LOL!!! So funny! Any OH MY Kankuro sure is particuler when it comes to ordering food! LOL! this chapter was quite funny!! I like where this is going! BAAA! i cant wait for chapter 5!!! sasuke's plans...YAY! woot! go sasuke! good grief! what will he do when he finds out Gaara has taken his love away?! GAAA! can't wait! Hurry up already!!! SHEESH! *giggle* d(^-^)b
oh yeah...and Gaara saying "WTF" LOLOLOL! :D
village has been holding for me for the last 13 years and now I'm here to
collect it. " <---------Gigglies!!! YAY!
LOL!!! So funny! Any OH MY Kankuro sure is particuler when it comes to ordering food! LOL! this chapter was quite funny!! I like where this is going! BAAA! i cant wait for chapter 5!!! sasuke's plans...YAY! woot! go sasuke! good grief! what will he do when he finds out Gaara has taken his love away?! GAAA! can't wait! Hurry up already!!! SHEESH! *giggle* d(^-^)b
oh yeah...and Gaara saying "WTF" LOLOLOL! :D
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn it! it cut off my review!!! lucky i have starteed to Copy/Paste them to avoid having to retype! ;D Here's the rest: Gigglies!!! YAY! LOL!!! So funny! Any OH MY Kankuro sure is particuler when it comes to ordering food! LOL! this chapter was quite funny!! I like where this is going! BAAA! i cant wait for chapter 5!!! sasuke's plans...YAY! woot! go sasuke! good grief! what will he do when he finds out Gaara has taken his love away?! GAAA! can't wait! Hurry up already!!! SHEESH! *giggle* d(^-^)b oh yeah...and Gaara saying "WTF" LOLOLOL! :D
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! ^-^
PLease continue writing/updating ^^
PLease continue writing/updating ^^
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, from the bite you posted the next chapter looks pretty good. Funny, at least (I love how you're writing Sasuke). Good luck.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
of course Naruto is flexible being ninjas and all that, and not to mention the stamina they get from all that training but with Gaara and Naruto having demons, they can beat Sasuke in a marathon of sex any time.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. very, very nice.
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright the wrath of Garra!This sounds like a really fun read.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy with the developements of this chapter! I'm not really sure which pairings going to be the main one in the end, but right now I'm just anticipating the confrontation. How's Sasuke going to react to this? Not to mention how will NARUTO react? Good luck with the next chapter.