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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue!!!!!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue, yes? Pwease? T'is a very awesome start to something very awesome, indeed!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You have to continue this!!! *spazzes* That was absolutely AMAZING!!! I loved it!!! Yeah!!! d(^-^)b (<--- thumbs up, fyi) LOL, I think that this is a great idea, and I really enjoyed the way you began it -- great characterizations, and quite funny!!! ^___~ I can't wait to find out what happens next, so keep up the good work and update ASAP, kk? Ja ne!!!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I do beleive I want you to continue It's awsome very nice please make more chappies soon
Loves arry
Loves arry
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i like it. it was nicely written and has opportunity to grow into a great fic! slightly work on the dialogue being a little slower-paced (yes, I know Naruto has a booming personality, but even so...^^;) yup, and then you're all set.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eek. Steamy. ^____< Very yum so far.
Please continue! Ke ke ke.
Please continue! Ke ke ke.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You have to continue! This is really well-written so you have to do more.
Update soon!
Update soon!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Har ^_^ Too me, that seems like how Naruto would be when he grows up. Totally unembarrassed about himself.
Well written, everything seemed to happen really fast though. Anywho, till your next chapter.
Well written, everything seemed to happen really fast though. Anywho, till your next chapter.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue, you were just getting to the interesting part ^__^
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey continue it that wasent fair why did you stop it