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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i soooo want to read more of this. you had better continue!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG please continue! how could you do this to us! you're so meeeeean to stop there! *pouts*
...so anyways, please continue you fantabulous story! xxx
...so anyways, please continue you fantabulous story! xxx
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a good solid start to some amusing shower action when you stopped writing,that isn't even a cliff hanger that is an out and out tease.This is ADULT fan fiction,games and manipulations to get reveiws are really not welcome at all in my book.Who needs the stress,its counter productive.If I was into doing what people told me to I wouldn't be an animae/manga fan in the first place so cut the crap please. I would still like to read your peice,I don't hold grudges, hope you don't either cause you asked for it.Thank You
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm ..... I wounder where this is going. *Wink*
I like the story so far keep going.
I like the story so far keep going.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to sign my reveiw.See above.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good definetly continue. I hope you get another chapter out soon can't wait.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oOo hot...keep it up!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, wow. For your first time, this is really good. Of course you should continue, lol. I like how you actually write in full sentences. Most people here don't. Very, very high praise from me. Keep it up.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, did you know my best friend (male) teased my boyfriend about his 'size' when my boyfriend refused to share the shower with him. The exact same way Naruto teases sasuke in your fic. It was hilarious. *happy sigh* Good old memories... only it didn't end up in sex... Poor perverted me. ^^;;;
Nah, anyways. Good story. I can't wait 'till I read the next chapter. :D
Nah, anyways. Good story. I can't wait 'till I read the next chapter. :D
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say... I loved it! And I really want to know what happens next.